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【写作宝典】2023年小升初英语写作专项复习 话题四
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话题四:谈论计划和天气
[写作素材]同学们,暑假快到了,你计划在假期里去海南并拍照留念,还计划去看看爷爷奶奶,帮他们做做家务等等。结合天气情况,以“My Summer Holiday”为题,写一篇关于假期计划的作文。要求不少于50词。
参考词汇:visit Hainan,take photos,swim in the sea ,visit grandparents,help them do some housework
审题要点:
· 审人称:第一人称
· 审时态:一般将来时
· 审要点:when what how where who
· 理思路:
开头总起下文→开门见山交代假期计划并表达假期意愿→Summer holiday is coming.I’m going to . ..
中间主体部分→详细描述活动计划,包括时间,地点,天气,出行方式以及同行人员等等→ It will be... I’m going to...with ... We are going to ....
结尾总结全文→谈谈感受,写写评价情绪等 →I think....
My Summer Holiday
[范文参考]
My Summer Holiday
Summer holiday is coming. This summer holiday I plan to take a trip to Hainan with my parents and my cousins. First we are going to Sanya by plane.We are going there in July. We are going to take photos and eat lots of delicious sea food there. It will be hot. We are going to pick up shells and swim in the sea. In August I am going to visit my grandparents and stay there for about a month with them.I will help them do some housework. I will read books and listen to music with them.I think I will have a good time during my summer holiday. What about you?
[素材积累]
活动:go on a trip 去旅行 go shopping 去购物 visit grandparents拜访爷爷奶奶
take photos 拍照 help grandparents with housework帮助爷爷奶奶做家务 have a
picnic野餐read books 看书 draw pictures 画画 listen to music 听 clean the room
打扫房间
天气:sunny 晴朗的 windy有风的 rainy 多雨的 cloudy 多云的 snow下雪warm 暖和的 hot 热的 cool 凉爽的
时间: in July在七月 in August在八月in the morning/afternoon/evening 在上午/下午/晚上
交通方式:by bus 乘公共汽车 by train 乘火车 by plane 乘飞机
感受:happy 高兴的 have a good time 玩得愉快 hav