内容正文:
读后续写
June 1, 2021
MDM Company
读后续写——是什么
提供一段350词以内的语言材料,要求考生依据该材料内容、所给段落开头语进行续写(150词左右),将其发展成一篇有逻辑衔接、情节和结构完整的短文。
June 1, 2021
MDM Company
读后续写——怎么考
选材特点
所需阅读的短文在350词以内;
多以记叙文故事类文章或夹叙夹议类文章为主;
故事通俗易懂,情节跌宕起伏,上下文连贯性强,主题线索贯穿始终;
人物性格鲜明,情感丰富;
话题贴近生活,有趣味性。
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如何读
How to read
步骤
1
审题目,圈关键
2
定要点,列提纲
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炼语言,成文章
续写所用时间:1h--50min--45min--40min--35,30..
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1.Reading for basic information
who
great-grandmother, I
where
At great-grandmother’s home
when
That summer
阅读基本信息
That summer,I lost my job. One day, I visited my great-grandmother. She asked me to set up her new smartphone and teach her how to use it. However, she can't learn to swipe the screen. So she got angry and asked me to take my phone away. As I was about to leave my grandmother's house, I thought that she was angry and I shouldn't have left.
Main idea
那年夏天,我丢了工作。一天,我拜访了我的曾祖母。她让我把她的新智能手机安装好并教她如何使用。但是,她学不会滑动屏幕。因此她生气了,让我把手机拿走。当我要离开祖母家时,我想在她还生气的时候,我不应该离开。
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2. Read for plot
读情节
beginning
I lost my job.
I visited my great-grandmother and promised her to teach her to use her new phone.
The following day I try to teach her how to use her new phone.
Continuation para 1: “Come on, Eileen. One more try.” I said.
Continuation para 2: I was not feeling so hopeless any more now.
ending
She was angry that she couldn't learn to swipe the screen, and when I was about to leave, I realized I couldn’t.
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I lost my job.
I visited my great-grandmother and promised her to teach her to use her new phone.
情节发展
情感发展
hopeless
amazed
feel a sense of love for her
The following day I try to teach her how to use her new phone.
she was angry that she couldn‘t learn to swipe the screen, and when I was about to leave, I realized I couldn’t do it.
2. Read for plot
读情节
She was 92, I remind myself. This had been tiring for her.
I didn’t want to go home when she was angry and upset.
unhappy 不高兴的
calm 平静的
frustrated 挫败的
sad 难过的
delighted 愉快的
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great-grandmother Eileen
My great-grandmother Eileen is fierce, loyal, and strong and a bit of legend