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WRITING PRACTICE
A letter of advice
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Dear Tom,
I am glad to receive your letter, but I am sorry to hear you’re having trouble in making new friends in your new school. It is my pleasure to offer you some advice.
Firstly, believe in yourself, smile and be friendly, because smiling is an open invitation to others. Secondly, you can look for people with the same interest as you, whom you are likely to get along with and share your happiness. Lastly, it is a good idea to help others when necessary. If you are always ready to help others, they will understand you better.
I do hope my advice is of much help. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Lihua
收到信的反馈
对问题的感受
写作目的
建议+原因
希望、期待
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第一段:收信反馈+共情+写作目的/重申问题+写作目的
I’m delighted/pleased to know that…
Learning that…, I would like to give you some suggestions.
You have asked me for advice with regard to/regarding…, so I’m writing to put forward some useful suggestions.
第二段:连词+建议+理由
Firstly/first of all/to begin with/to start with
Secondly/what’s more/moreover/besides/in addition/additionally/furthermore
Lastly/finally/at last/last but not least
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第二段:连词+建议+理由
连词
Firstly/first of all/to begin with/to start with
Secondly/what’s more/moreover/besides/in addition/additionally/furthermore
Lastly/finally/at last/last but not least
建议
You’d better …
It’s wise/necessary/important to do…
It would be a wise choice if you do..
You are supposed to do/should do/ought to do…
I advise you to do…
Why not/why don’t you…?
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第二段:连词+建议+理由
理由
Because…
In this way, you can…
It will…
第三段:希望+期待或祝愿
I hope my suggestions will be of great benefit/help to you.
I hope my advice can be helpful/beneficial to you.
I hope you take my suggestions into serious consideration/account.
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Learning/Knowing that you feel unwell/ill due to dietary