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Unit 2
Healthy Lifestyle
第4课时
Using Language(给编辑写一封信)
高考总复习 一轮复习导学案 · 数学(提高版)
5A新学案 英语·选择性修第三册
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Ⅰ. 书信的基本构成要素
1. 称呼(即Dear Editor);
2. 正文(基本思路是:Problem→Decision→Action→Result);
3. 信尾敬语(即Yours truly和Sincerely);
4. 署名。
Ⅱ. 正文部分的注意事项
1. 主体时态的确定:一般将来时或一般过去时;
2. 正文部分的人称:通常为第一人称;
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3. 正文部分如果分享成功改变某一不良习惯的故事,其写作内容为:交代曾面临的问题、为解决问题而做出的决定、实施的举措以及产生的积极结果。正文部分如果是介绍改变不良习惯的行动计划,其写作内容为:交代面临的问题、为解决问题做出的决定、准备采取的行动以及预期的积极结果。
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Ⅲ. 句型句式
1. 问题的呈现(并列结构、非谓语动词等)
① I often felt sleepy and dizzy, and lacked passion. Most worrying, though, I got the flu easily and experienced many toothaches, too. (并列结构作表语或谓语)
我经常感到昏昏欲睡和头晕目眩。不过最令人担忧的是,我很容易得流感,而且经常牙痛。
② After starting high school, I felt stressed out and always relaxed by playing computer games. (动名词结构作宾语)
高中开始后,我感到压力重重,总是通过玩电脑游戏来放松自己。
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2. 为解决问题而做出的决定(非谓语动词、三大从句等)
① I made up my mind to change two things in my life: to eat nothing with sugar and to exercise regularly. (不定式短语作宾语)
我下定决心改变我生活中的两件事:不吃含糖的任何东西,定期锻炼身体。
② I decided to take control of my life and find other ways to relax. (不定式短语作宾语)
我决定掌控自己的生活,寻找其他的放松方式。
③ So after the camp, I realised that it was very, very important to adjust my lifestyle. (宾语从句)
因此,夏令营之后,我意识到调整自己的生活方式是非常重要的。
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3. 实施的举措(三大从句、并列句、非谓语动词短语和倒装)
① After that I stopped buying all the sweets, biscuits, and sugary drinks that I used to have every day. (动名词作宾语;定语从句)
此后,我不再买我过去每天都吃的糖果、饼干和含糖饮料。
② Whenever I went out with friends, I brought snacks from home, things that didn't have any added sugar: fruit, nuts, dried meat, etc. (让步状语从句)
每次和朋友们外出时,我都会从家里面带零食,一些没添加任何成分的东西:水果、坚果和肉干等。
③ Rock climbing, bowling, watching comedies, and playing basketball were the things I thought of doing instead. (动名词作主语;定语从句)
攀岩、打保龄球、看喜剧片和打篮球都是我考虑过的取而代之的事情。
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4. 产生的积极结果(尽量运用高分短语和句型)
① It has enhanced the quality of my life, improving my health and increasing my happiness. (由and连接的并列状语)
这改善了我的健康,增加了我的幸福感,提高了我的生活质量。
② I get refreshed through climbing, spend more time with my dad, and get to meet new friends. (由and连接