内容正文:
备战2023年中考英语高分作文
热点02 手机进校园
一、材料作文
1.现在智能手机运用越来越普遍,上周你们班举行了一次以“初中生使用微信的利与弊”为主题的班会,同学们各抒已见。你针对同学们的不同意见, 做了以下记录。请根据表格内容以“The Opinions of Using WeChat”为题写一篇短文。
利
弊
1. 提供交流的平台,可以上网课
1. 过度使用、影响学习
2. 能认识更多的朋友, 方便联系
2. 交友不慎、容易受骗
3. 能学习更多的东西,增加兴趣
3. 长时间看手机对眼睛有害
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注意: 1. 词数80字以上。
2. 文中不得出现反映考生信息的真实人名、地名等内容。
提示: platform平台;rick欺骗; be convenient for对……方便; 网课online classThe Opinions of Using WeChat
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【参考范文】
The Opinions of Using WeChat
More and more middle school students use WeChat. Different students have different opinions about using it.
Some students think WeChat is a very useful tool. It can provide a platform to communicate with their friends. And they can make more friends and learn more knowledge by WeChat. They also attend online classes by WeChat. WeChat is convenient for them to connect.
However, some students think WeChat will affect their study if they spend too much time using it. And they may be tricked by strange net friends. Last but not least, it will also affect their vision if they use WeChat for a long time. In my opinion, we should use WeChat properly by not using it more than two hours a day, and make sure that we don’t use it when we are studying.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:本文的时态是一般现在时;
③提示:微信利与弊的大部分要点已给出,适当地补充一些自己的观点。人称以第三人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步,总述不同的人对使用微信有着不同的观点;
第二步,具体阐述同学们利与弊的观点;
第三步,以自己的观点做个总结。
[亮点词汇]
provide a platform提供一个平台
attend online classes上网课
affect their study影响他们的学习
[高分句型]
However, some students t