内容正文:
1. 读后续写中,需描写的是人(外貌,,神态动作),情,景(适度),文中人物的互动。
2. 续写内容合情合理。主旨可以回扣原文关键句,可以适度提炼。
3. 描写叙述部分照应原文细节。
4. 第一段的最后一句和第二段的首句要衔接。
5. 第一段的第一句要用心写好,句式上可以下功夫,词汇上不要为难老师。
6. 情节发展部分可以设身处地地去想象。适度的细节描写会更动人。
1. 外貌 1)头发 blond curly hair 金色卷曲头发/ lank and flowing hair 平直柔顺的头发
bristle and stiff hair 短而硬的头发 / silky hair/voice 丝滑、轻柔的
untidy and unkempt hair 凌乱而不修边幅的头发/ponytail 马尾辫
whirl in the wind 在风中飞舞/
With life’s burden heavier, the lank and flowing hair has lost lustre, as did her skin.
随着生活担子的加重, 她的头发和皮肤都失去了光泽。
2)脸庞 a haggard and weather-beaten face 一张疲倦而饱经沧桑的脸
a luminous and spirited face 一张灿烂而有精神的脸庞
a pallid and spiritless face 一张苍白而无精打采的脸庞
a haggard and wrinkled face 一张憔悴而爬上皱纹的脸庞
3)眉毛 眼睛等 crescent eyes 新月形眼睛 drooping eyelids 耷拉的眼睑
starry/watery eyes/ swollen eyes
His lips parted, revealing a set of pearly teeth. 珍珠般的
tender and fair/rosy skin 白皙柔嫩/红润的皮肤
a slender and willowy lady 一位苗条优雅的女士
a well-featured lady 一位五官精致的女士
a babbling baby 一个牙牙学语的孩子 a toddler 一位蹒跚学步的孩子
2. 人的性格 introverted 内向的 extroverted 外向的、 a man of easy access 容易相处的人
、have an agreeable personality 有令人舒服的性格、 have a gloomy/timid/bossy /mild temperament 性情
3. 人的感觉 faintly轻微感觉到/vaguely/intensely强烈感觉到 feel his toes benumbed 脚趾 麻 木/ his face flaming hot 脸颊发烫
feel furious 感觉愤怒、frustrated挫败、depressed沮丧
feel a fire flaring up within 感觉怒火中烧
stunned/dumbfounded/startled 吃惊的
Stunned and curious, he opened the exquisitely-packed (包装精美的)box, only to be greeted by the gift he had been dreaming for a long time. 感觉的形容词放在句首
Bewildered and emotionally aroused, he unpacked the bag, only to be greeted by considerately prepared snacks and fruits. 迷惑而又好奇的
Conscience-stricken and upset, he stepped towards the the teacher, handed her the dear/close-to-heart 心爱的 dictionary, and finally uttered the word, “sorry.” 内疚而不安的