专题07 书面表达12篇-2023年中考英语逆袭冲刺名校模拟真题特快专递（深圳专用）

2023深圳市中考英语逆袭冲刺名校模拟真题速递

第二期

专题07 书面表达12篇

一、书信作文

1．（2022·广东深圳·深圳市罗湖中学校考三模）假定你是李华，你在深圳市博物馆网站上看到古代艺术馆面向13~16岁的中学生招募英语解说员，你想成为其中一员。请根据以下内容提示，给该馆负责人张馆长写一封申请信。

要点：

1. 写信意图

2. 自身优势：①热爱文博事业、热心公益事业

②英语好、沟通能力强

③……

3. 希望被录用

参考词汇：

解说员：commentator

文博事业：museum and archaeological issue

公益事业：public welfare issues

要求：

1. 词数80左右（开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数）；

2. 要点齐全，可适当发挥；

3. 条理清晰，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范；

4. 文中不能出现真实姓名、校名。

Dear Mr. Zhang,

I’m Li Hua, a fifteen-year-old middle school student. I’m delighted to know from the website that the Ancient Art Gallery of Shenzhen Museum is recruiting English commentators. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

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I am looking forward to your reply!

Yours,

Li Hua

【答案】例文

Dear Mr. Zhang,

I’m Li Hua, a fifteen-year-old middle school student. I’m delighted to know from the website that the Ancient Art Gallery of Shenzhen Museum is recruiting English commentators. I am interested in the position and willing to apply for it.

I’m convinced that I’m qualified for the position. First and foremost, I am not only keen on museum and archaeological issues but also devoted to public welfare issues. What’s more, being fluent in spoken English, I am able to instruct visitors in English without difficulty. Besides, I am good at communicating with others, which can be a great help for the voluntary work. Last but not least, I have an experience in volunteering as an English commentator in a gallery, so I am well-prepared for the job.

I would appreciate it very much if you could take my application into consideration.

I am looking forward to your reply!

Yours,

Li Hua

【详解】1. 题干解读：题目要求写一封申请信，说明自己想成为艺术馆的英语解说员；要求包含所有内容提示。

2. 写作指导：此作文时态用一般现在时；采用第一人称口吻；可采用4段落格式，第一段：说明写信的目的；第二段：阐述自身优势来说明能胜任这份工作；第三段希望自己能够被录用；第四段希望收到回信。

2．（2022秋·广东深圳·九年级统考一模）你是英语校报编辑李华。校报收到初一新生Ben的来信，他提出了所面临的两个问题。请你根据以下提示写一封回信，说明 Ben 的问题，提出你的建议并陈述理由。

要点：

Ben’s problems	Your advice and reasons
朋友少，感觉孤单	1.参加学校社团(club)——结识更多朋友

	2. (请你补充)
英语单词难记	1.多阅读英语故事、新闻，在运用中学单词
	2.(请你补充)

 

要求：1. 80 词以上，短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数；

2. 条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，标点正确；

3. 文中不得使用真实的校名与姓名。

Dear Ben,I am sorry to hear that you are having trouble getting used to life in middle school.

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【答案】例文

Dear Ben,

I am sorry to hear that you are having trouble getting used to life in middle school.

In your letter you said that you always felt lonely because of having few friends. I think it is a good choice to join some clubs in your school. In this way, you can make more friends who share the same interest with you. Besides, you’ d better be friendly to others. Smile at others and you are sure to get a smile in return. On the other hand, you found it difficult to remember English words. Reading more English stories and news can help you learn English words in a practical way. In addition, if you can develop a habit of keeping an English diary every day, it will be easier for you to remember more words.

I hope you will find these suggestions useful.

Yours

Li Hua

【详解】[总体分析]