专题20 学会感恩-冲刺2023年中考英语热点材料写作专练

令学利网 学科网原创，让学司更客易！ JP.ZXXK.COM 学科网精品频道全力推荐 假如你是某国际中学九年级学生张飞，请你根据以下校园广播站的征稿启事，写一篇英语短文进行投稿。 征稿启事 毕业在即，三年的初中生活即将结束。在 这三年当中，哪位老师对你的帮助和影响最 大呢？校广播站现开展以“师恩难忘”为主题 的英语征稿活动。要点内容有： 1.Who is your favorite teacher? 2.What is he she like? 3.How did he/she help you? 4.What do you leam from him/ her? 写作要求： 1.包含所给要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯： 2.条理清晰，语句通顺，突出重点（老师帮助自己的过程）： 3.不少于100词（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 指点迷津 审题 时态：一般过去时、一般现在时以及现在完成时 人称：第一人称、第三人称 小贴士：师者，传道授业解惑也。居里夫人曾说过：“不管一个人取得多么值得骄做的成绩，都应该饮水思 源，应该记住是自己的老师为他们的成长播下了最初的种子。” 点拨 空原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 1 令学利网 学科网原到，让李司更客易！ JP.ZXXK.COM 学科网精品频道全力推荐 本次写作任务要求同学们根据征稿启事介绍一位恩师，属于记叙文。根据所给提示，可从以下三个方面进 行写作： 第一部分：开头一引出自己最喜欢的老师： 第二部分：主体 阐述喜欢老师的原因以及老师对自己的帮助： 第三部分：结尾一 讲述自己的收获（从老师身上学到的品质）。 谋篇布局 Mr.Lee is my favorite teacher 开头 and he has given me much help. Why I like him: A Patient with students. ▲Ready to help others. My How he helped me: favorite 主体 A At first I nearly gave up teacher leaming English. ▲He invited me to watch an English movie. A I began to learn English harder with his help. 结尾 I have learned from him that we should never give up. 语料储备 。原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究： 2 令学利网 学科网原创，让学司更客易！ JP.ZXXK.COM 学科网精品频道全力推荐 Words phrases consider D favorite help ▣remember▣invite▣chance ▣succeed☐possible☐carefully popular teach subject ★be patient with★be ready to ★give up★instead of★to one's relief ★be thankful to★as long as ★with one's help★learn a lesson Sentences ▣It's time for..todo I remember that... I wasn't sure whether I could... What I learned from...is... With Mr.Lee's help,I began to put more effort into English learning. Mr.Lee told me in his own way that we should never give up. I remember that at first I didn't believe I could learn English well To my relief,he invited me to watch a movie instead of talking with me. The movie tells us that everyone can succeed as long as they work hard. 自我展示 One possible version: 3 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学利网 学科网原创，让学司更客易！ JP.ZXXK.COM 学科网精品频道全力推荐 It's time to say goodbve to my junior high school life.Over the last three vears,Mr