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专题10 主题分类要掌握 写作片刻不停留
主题训练 叙事忆旧
名师点拨:
这个主题训练是以记叙文为主的练习,也是初中学生必须掌握的写作文体之一。要写好此类主题,学生要学会做一个有心人,注意平时身边发生的小事(如:爱心捐款活动、志愿者活动等),从一个小的切入口来,清楚描述事情,从而悟出道理。
I主题词汇
an unforgettable experience(一次难忘的经历),have a lot of memories(有很多回忆), be in a good mood, learn…from.., look forward to doing, be proud of, in order to, come true, do sb. a favor, give sb. a hand, help sb. with sth., with the help of sb., take good care of sb., make one's life happy and full of laughter(使某人的生活快乐并充满笑声)
II常用句型
1. The more. . . , the more. . .
2. ...is the best way to...
3. ... in order to...
4. It is common knowledge that...
5. I once had an experience. . .
6. It is the most unforgettable experience that has ever happened in my life.
7. I am sure that. . .
8. Memory is a kind of treasure.
9. … plays an important role in our daily life.
10. Everyone knows, ". . . '
11. We should do . . . so as to do. . .
III模拟试题
The most unforgettable experience in my memory
a. What happened to you?
b. When and where did it happen?
c. Why is it unforgettable?
要点分析:
1. 可以写写你的经历(时间、人物、事件、结果)和你的感受。
2. 仔细审题,确定时态(一般过去时为主),确定需要用的词组和句型。
3. 为什么难忘?从你的经历中学到了什么(详写)?
4. 切记不要偏题(如:不是“难忘的”而写成其他的感受)。
写作思路
I)你的经历 ( when where, who, what, how... )
1. I once had an experience. ..
2. It is the most unforgettable experience that has ever happened in my lite...
3. Three years ago, my parents and I flew to Japan.
4. My classmates and I had a birthday party in March this year.
5. The most unforgettable experience in my memory was one day my classmates and I went to the park,
6. Last summer I went to visit my uncle by air.
7. I will never forget the military training.
8. One day, I noticed a man was stealing a woman's purse on a bus.
9. We went to Disneyland. It is an amazing amusement park.
10. We got up early in the morning and we were all very excited because my family and I went to the countryside to have a picnic.
11. There are a lot of memories in my heart that I can't forget. When I was ten yea