专题09 技巧千面手 写作可无忧-【口袋书】2023年中考英语必背知识手册（思维导图+背诵手册）（全国通用版）

专题09 技巧千面手 写作可无忧 一、作文优化技巧及过渡方法： 改进文章内容： Mother does all that she can for us. 1. She takes good care of my daily life. （1）She cooks meals for me. （2）She takes me to hospital. 2. Besides, she supports me in my study. （1）She invites me to libraries. （2）She helps me with my Maths. 3. What’s more, she always encourages me. （1）She tells me not to give up. （2）She suggests I have another try. 第一次 改进句子结构 1. She takes good care of my daily life. （1）She cooks delicious meals for me with love . （2）She takes me to hospital when I get sick. 2. Besides, she supports me in my study. （1）She invites me to libraries so that we can enjoy reading together. （2）No matter how busy she is, She helps me with my Maths. 3. What’s more, she always encourages me. （1）She tells me not to give up when I have difficulties. （2）If I want to give up half way, she suggests I have another try. 第二次 改进句子结构 1. My mother is a responsible nanny/ mother. （1） She cooks delicious meals for me with love. （2） When I get sick, she takes me to hospital as soon as possible. 2. Besides, my mother is a close friend. （1） She invites me to libraries so that we can enjoy reading together. （2） No matter how busy she is, She helps me with my Math. 3. What is more, my mother is a wise teacher. （1）She tells me not to give up when I have difficulties. （2）If I want to give up half way, she suggests I have another try. 【总结提炼】作文优化技巧：善用定语，副词和连词，进行适当地扩词和扩句。 过渡方法： 1. 那就是(说)…；亦即… 　That is to say, … = That is, … = Namely, … 　例：我们生活需有规律。也就是说，早睡早起戒除烟酒。 　We need to live a regular life. That is, we can keep good hours and refrain from smoking and drinking in the daily activities. 2. (A) 基于这个理由 For this reason … 　(B) 为了这个目的 For this purpose, … 　例：基于这个理由，我已决定把行医作为未来的职业。 　For this reason, I have decided to take practicing medicine as my future career. 3. 我们有理由相信… 　We have reasons to believe (that)... 　例：我们有理由相信体罚应该严格禁止。 We have reasons to believe that corporal punishment should be strictly prohibited. 4. 事实上 　As a matter of fa