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Proofreading 1
I am a 18-year-old boy. Having been busy at my study and seldom helping my parents with the housework, I feel quite sorry. What can I do help?
Last Sunday, when my parents went shopping, I suddenly got an idea: why not giving the rooms a thorough cleaning? I collected the books on the floor and put them in the place. Then I wiped the dust off all the furnitures. Finally, I swept and mop the floors.
When my parents returned, they were surprised and happy. My mother gave me a hug but I could see satisfaction in his eyes. Exhausted as I was, I never felt such happy.
Proofreading 2
Reading is good for babies in developing their intelligence and interest. Mom would read to me if I was a baby, that developed my love for reading. As I grew elder and could read by myself, my father often takes me to bookstores and left me there reading.
On my birthdays, the gifts sending by my parents are always books. It is them who let me know benefits of reading.
Personally, I feel strong that reading does us lots of goods. It can broaden our horizons and make us more intelligent. Additionally, it is helpful in our learning, especially in writing about good compositions.
So let’s start reading now.
Proofreading 3
One Saturday morning, I suddenly noticed my room was a completely mess, what really annoyed me. I realized too many useful things took up a lot of space. So I decided to throw it away and do some cleaning. It took me a whole day get all the works done. Finally the room was tidy again and everything was in the order.
This was also true for life: we add more and more to our life, hoped to get a better life. But sometimes the more we add, the bad our life becomes. After all, sometimes less is more.
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