内容正文:
A Survey Report
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Writing Task
I recently surveyed my classmates about their views on the new English textbook.
①According to the survey, 80% of the students were quite satisfied with it, while 15% disliked it and 5% had no opinion.②Students who liked it said the pictures with the texts were very attractive, which greatly aroused their interests in learning.③Moreover, the book was very interesting, covering many hot topics and providing lots of cultural
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knowledge of the world.④However, students who disliked it complained there were too many new words and difficult sentences,making the texts difficult to understand.
⑤In conclusion, the new English textbook has helped most students improve their English enormously.
【题型分析】
调查报告是针对某一现象、某一事件或某一问题进行深入细致的调查这一类写作题,要求同学们根据调查结果,对某种现象进行分析并谈谈自己的看法,写一份调查报告。在写作过程中,需要运用叙述的方法把事情的起因、发展和结果交代清楚。一般来说,调查报告由开头、主体和结尾三个部分组成。写作中要注意所运用材料的真实性,叙议结合。
【写作步骤】
1.Present the topic;
2.List the findings;
3.Make a summary.
认真审题,明确写作内容
时态
写作
内容
Beginning——时间、对象、内容(1句)
Body——调查结果(3句)
Ending——个人观点及理由(1句)
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渡
衔
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关键:
1. 对比分析,找出异同点;
2. 表达多样,避免重复罗列数据。
——现在时(常用)
调查报告写作要点
1.注意审题, 转换图表。撰写调查报告时, 通常需要结合图表, 观察、对比调查数据, 并把调查结果和数据转换为文字表达, 并按写作内容给出的要点按顺序进行写作 。
2.确定时态, 规范全文。引出报告结果或数据时,发表议论和个人观点, 通常用一般现在时。若出现具体的时间状语, 如last year,next year, recently等时, 应根据时间使用适当的时态。
3. 变换表达, 丰富语汇。调查报告中多出现相同内容的描述或分析, 为避免重复, 建议使用不同语言和句式表达同类信息。例如,引出调查数据时,可使用The survey /result shows that ...; As the data shows,...; As we can see from the chart, ...; According to the table, ...; From the data, we can learn that ...等句型。
4.相关短语。
(1)make a survey 作了一次调查
(2)as for how to至于怎样
(3)update the website更新网站
(4)50% of the girls 50%的女生
(5)next in line...接下来, 位居第二
(6)compared with...同……比起来
(7)communicate with...与……交流
(8)account for/take up占(多少比例)
(9)be in favor of...支持/赞成……
(10)as far as sb.is concerned就某人看来
(11)have a lot in common有很多共同点
(11)get along well with...与……相处融洽
(12)arouse their interest激发了他们的兴趣
(13)have a better understanding of 更好地了解
(14)put...in the s