Unit 12 书面表达 课件 2022-2023学年人教版英语九年级全册

书面表达 Unit 12 You're supposed to shake hands. 一、话题分析 本单元主要谈论在过去发生的令人意外的事情,一般用一般过去时和过去完成时来描述。 2 二、写作方法 “两态一线法”写“过去发生的事件类”作文 1.“两态”指写作时主要运用两种时态:一般过去时和过去完成时 2.“一线”指以发生在过去的事情为主线 3 三、素材积累 “过去发生的事件类”作文常用词汇: luckily // unluckily // special // unusual // suddenly // by the time // without doing sth. // help... with // on one’s way to... // too...to... // fall asleep // rush to // oversleep // go off // unexpected // show up // till “过去发生的事件类”作文常用句型: When ... , ... had ... By the time ... , ... had ... Before ... , ... had already ... As ... was / were ... , ... What an unusual / a special / ... day! I was too excited because... 5 I really had a wonderful/bad day today. I remembered that I had... Yesterday was really a bad/wonderful day for me, which I will never forget about. 6 四、写作任务 在你的学习和生活中,一定经历过对你来说很特殊的日子(开心、感动、有趣、激动、难忘等)。 请搜寻你的记忆长河,用英语记录下这特殊的一天。 提示要点: (1) 对你来说哪一天是一个特殊的日子; (1) 在这一天,发生了什么事; (3) 你的感受、收获,对你的影响。 (4)词数:100词左右。 8 五、写作模板 具体的特殊日子 发生的具体事情 I was too excited to fall asleep because the next day would be my birthday. · I rushed to school without eating breakfast. · A bike knocked me down on my way to school. · Luckily, my friends came to see me and helped me with my schoolwork. · They also had a wonderful birthday party for me that evening. A special day 感受收获及影响 What a special day! 9 六、满分作文 _ A special day Once, I was too excited to fall asleep because the next day would be my birthday. The next morning, by the time I got up, it had already been seven o’clock. I rushed to school without eating breakfast. Unluckily, a bike knocked me down on my way to school and the doctor told me that I had to stay in bed for a few days. 10 _ I felt so sad. Luckily, my friends came to see me and helped me with my schoolwork. They also had a wonderful birthday party for me that evening. What a special day! 11 假如你是李华,英语老师让每位同学写一篇短文介绍自己是如何度过暑假的。请你根据要点写一篇70 词左右的短文。 要点提示: 1. 暑假和父母一起去拉萨(Lhasa) 游玩;2. 参观了布达拉宫(the Potala Palace)、纳木错(Namtso),品尝了当地特色美食;3. 谈谈你的感受。 书面表达 一 My Lucky Day 开篇点题 reme