Unit 5 Why do you like pandas-初中英语人教版七年级下册单元书面表达提分攻略

Unit 5　 Why do you like pandas? 单元话题写作 ——喜爱的动物 【写作任务】  请根据方框内的提示词语写一篇英语短文，介绍你最喜欢的动物大熊猫。 Beibei, five years old, China, cute, shy, Beijing Zoo 【思路点拨】 1. 定基调 体裁：说明文 时态：一般现在时 人称：第三人称 2. 谋布局，写句子 完善P2 谋布局 写句子 介绍大熊猫 产地 及居 住地 (1) 贝贝是一只大熊猫，它来自中国四川。 Beibei is a panda. It ________________ Sichuan, China. (2) 它目前在北京动物园生活。 Now it ____________ Beijing Zoo. is / comes from lives in 谋布局 写句子 介绍大熊猫 年龄、外貌、性情 (3) 贝贝五岁了，它很大。 Beibei is ______________. It’s very big. (4) 它黑白相间，并且有一双大眼睛。 It’s _________________ with two big eyes. (5) 它看起来很漂亮也很可爱，但有时它有点害羞。 It _____________________. But sometimes it’s ______________________. five years old black and white looks beautiful and cute kind of shy 谋布局 写句子 习性 (6) 它喜欢吃竹子。 It ____________ bamboo. (7) 它也喜欢在白天睡觉。 It ________________ in the day. 总结全文 (8) 我喜欢大熊猫，我认为我们应该保护大熊猫，因为它们是我们的朋友。 __________________. I think we should protect pandas because _________________. likes eating also likes sleeping I like pandas they are our friends 3. 巧衔接 在介绍某种动物时，应重点写它的产地、外貌、性情、习性等方面。这是通过语义相关联的方式使全文语义具有明显的统一性和连贯性。 4. 成篇章 Beibei is a panda. It comes from Sichuan, China. Now it lives in Beijing Zoo. It’s five years old and very big. It’s black and white with two big eyes, and it looks beautiful and cute. But sometimes it’s kind of shy. It likes eating bamboo, and also likes sleeping in the day. I like pandas. I think we should protect pandas because they are our friends. Practice makes perfect！ 　　某英文杂志向中学生征稿,请同学们以"My Favorite Animals"为题,根据以下提示,介绍一下自己最喜欢的动物。   1.What animals do you like best?  2.Why do you like them?  3....　 要求: 1.词数70左右; 2.短文意思连贯、符合逻辑; 3.所给提示词仅供选用。 提示词:cute, clever, helpful, friendly 人称:第三人称为主 时态:一般现在时 【谋篇布局】 开头:介绍自己最喜欢的动物 ①Of all the animals,... are my favorite animals. ②I like...best. 正文:介绍喜欢这个动物的原因 ①I like... best because ...not only ..., but also ... ②They are so ... that they can... ③And some ... can help ..., even ... 结尾:总结全文 ①In a word, I really like ... ②...are really our good friends. 【句子升格】 1.I like dog