35分写作规范练---2023年高考英语二轮复习专项突破（全国通用）

35分写作规范练(一) 写作(共两节，满分35分) 第一节　短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分) 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文，文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线(\\)划掉。 修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。 (2022·河南高三仿真模拟)In everybody's eyes, I was a good girl. Unlike other students, who will go against their parents, I often follow my parents' words. I don't think that to do something that go against the adults is a wise choice, and I do want to do something new. One day, I'd like to have my hairs cut. My mother didn't agree with me. This time, I insisted my idea. However, she supported me final. Something new made me to feel happy and be myself. Wore the new hairstyle, I looked like a cool boy, whom I was pleased with. My friends admired me for having the courage to change their image. 第二节　书面表达(满分25分) (2022·宜春4月模拟)你校英语社团微信公众号拟向高三学生开展题为“一起向未来”的征文活动，请你写一篇短文投稿。内容包括： 1.未来的梦想； 2.努力的方向； 3.展望和期待。 注意：1.词数100左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯。 Together for a Shared Future _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ 参考答案与解析 写作 第一节　短文改错 In everybody's eyes, I a good girl. Unlike other students, who will go against their parents, I often follow my parents' words. I don't think that to do something that against the adults is a wise choice, I do want to do something new. One day, I'd like to have my cut. My mother didn't agree with me. This time, I insisted my idea. However, she supported me . Something new made me to feel happy and be myself. the new hairstyle, I looked like a cool boy, I was pleased with. My friends admired me for having the courage to change image. 第二节　书面表达 One possible version： Together for a Shared Future The th