内容正文:
高中作文常见书信体——祝贺信
Dacy老师
写作整体布局思路
1.首段:表达祝贺的消息
2.中间段:写祝贺对方的是由
3.尾段:自己真诚的祝福语
祝贺信的内容
祝贺事由(录取,升迁,获胜,成绩……)
祝贺语
对方所取得成绩的主客观原因
相关的看法和建议
鼓励、赞扬、祝福
祝贺信的功能句
1. It is delightful for me to know that you are admitted/offered/promoted/have achieved …
2.I am writing to offer my sincerest congratulations on your promotion/ admission/success/victory/winning …
3.As your close friend, I am more than glad to share your …
4.It is beyond words how pleased I am at your …
5.I can well imagine how proud of you your parents are, who have been anxiously hoping to witness your …
6.In my view, you are always a talented … with abundant/excellent … and completely deserve the …
7.This … is a reward that you richly deserve.
8.After years of assiduous study and hard work, you have reached this milestone in your scholarship, which is a really great achievement you can be well proud of.
9.I am sure, you will make progress and obtain even greater achievement …
10.I wish you greater success in … and I am looking forward to …
11.I hope that the coming year(s) will bring you a further increase in …
常用句型
首段:
1.I have learned with delight that you...
2.I would like to show to you my sincere congratulations on ...
3.You must be very proud of your ...
4.And I feel very happy for you.
中间段:
1. ...is a very exciting news!
2.You are really...
3.I know this is surely owing to...
4.It is a reward you richly deserve for your ...
尾段:
1.With your..., I am sure that you will be a success in whatever you undertake.
2.Kindly let me know when you...
3.I hope...
4.My best wishes for your further success.
写作任务
假定你是李华,最近你收到你的英国朋友Jacob的来信,得知他已经被剑桥大学(the University of Cambridge)录取。请你写信向他表示祝贺。
内容包括:1. 表示祝贺;2. 谈谈你对他所取得的成绩的看法;3. 祝福。
注意:1. 词数100左右;2. 可以适当添加细节,以使行文连贯。
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