内容正文:
Section Ⅳ Writing
写一个戏剧剧本
[对应学生用书P145]
本单元的写作任务是戏剧剧本创作。戏剧剧本属于记叙文。在写作形式上以对话为主,主要包括戏剧人物、人物的语言、舞台说明性文字等。
[写作技巧]
1.确定剧情、故事梗概及主题;
2.确定剧中人物及其形象和性格特征;
3.确定故事发生的时间、地点、场景及其变化;
4.构思戏剧的矛盾冲突,包括事件的起因、发展、高潮和结局等。
[原文示例]
请将教材本单元“Reading for Writing”的课文改写成一篇60词左右的短文。
[审题谋篇]
明确体裁、话题
体裁:戏剧;
话题:Henry带百万英镑去买衣服
确定时态、人称
时态:以一般现在时为主;
人称:以第三人称为主
布局文章架构
开端:交代背景;
发展:为高潮做铺垫;
高潮:关键人物或物品的出现;
结局:人物态度的转变
列出核心要点
1.Henry 被瞧不起;
2.百万英镑纸币出现;
3.人物态度发生大转变
[词块积累]
1.裁缝店 the tailor's shop
2.用粗鲁的方式对待某人 treat sb.in a rude manner
3.根据……判断某人 judge sb.by ...
4.改变某人的态度 change one's attitude
5.范围广泛的 a wide range of
6.为……付款 pay for
[语法运用]
1.店员们对他态度粗鲁。(主+谓+宾+状)
The clerks treated him in a rude manner.
2.亨利说:“不要以貌取人。”(直接引语)
“Don't judge people by their clothes,” Henry said.
3.店主与店员们立刻改变了他们的态度。(主+谓+宾+状)
The owner and the clerks changed their attitudes at once.
4.店主给亨利展示了各种样式的好衣服。(主+谓+双宾语)
The owner showed Henry a wide range of nice clothes.
[连句成篇]
结合以上句子写一篇语言流畅、用词准确、逻辑严密的短文。
【参考范文】
When Henry walked into the tailor's shop,the clerks treated him in a rude manner.Henry asked them not to judge people by their clothes.After seeing Henry take out his millionpound bank note,the owner and the clerks changed their attitudes at once.The owner showed Henry a wide range of nice clothes and told Henry that it didn't matter if he couldn't pay for the clothes at once.
根据下面提示,写一个戏剧剧本,介绍亨利带着100万英镑的钞票去理发的过程。
1.亨利正走在大街上,看见了一家理发店,决定去理发;
2.理发师用粗鲁的态度接待了他;
3.亨利坐在椅子上等待;
4.理发师问他是否付得起理发的费用;
5.理发结束后,亨利出示了百万英镑的钞票;
6.理发师十分吃惊,并告诉他可以随时光临。
【参考范文】
(Henry is walking down the street when he sees a sign for a p