内容正文:
2023安徽省中考英语逆袭冲刺 名校模拟真题特快专递
第二期
专题06 书面表达12篇
1.(2023·安徽合肥·校考一模)习主席曾鼓舞大家“奋斗当其时,劳动创造幸福,实干成就伟业。”假如你是李华,曾经的哪次劳动经历令你至今记忆犹新呢?请以“My Meaningful Labor Experience”为题,用英语写一篇短文向你校英文报投稿,内容包括:
1. 劳动经历;
2. 你的收获和体会。
注意:
1. 词数80-100;
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
My Meaningful Labor Experience
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【答案】例文
My Meaningful Labor Experience
Last weekend, I made a dish for my parents. Seeing the vegetables in the kitchen, I chose to cook scrambled eggs with tomatoes. After watching the video on how to cook it, I started. Unfortunately, it burned and I failed. At the moment, I realized if I didn’t add enough oil, the eggs would easily stick the pan and burn. So I changed the way, and I succeeded in the end. When my parents saw my dish, they were so moved and happy that they ate it up.
Through this experience, I have learned that labor can not only be a meaningful thing but make me feel satisfied and happy.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇记叙文;
②时态:时态为“一般过去时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生注意不要遗漏“要点”中自己的收获和体会,注意要点要齐全。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍自己的一次劳动经历。围绕时间、地点、事件展开;
第二步,介绍自己的收获和体会。
[亮点词汇]
①scrambled eggs with tomatoes西红柿炒鸡蛋
②at the moment此刻
③in the end最后
④so...that...太……以致于
⑤not only...but...不仅……而且……
[高分句型]
①At the moment, I realized if I didn’t add enough oil, the eggs would easily stick the pan and burn.(省略引导词that的宾语从句;if引导的条件状语从句)
②When my parents saw my dish, they were so moved and happy that they ate it up.(when引导的