内容正文:
高分写作冲关练
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高分写作冲关练
写关于节日的介绍性文章
明过程要条理清楚,紧扣所给要点。说明文多
个英文网站面向中学生征稿,请你写一
用一般现在时。
篇英语稿件,介绍中秋节及这个节日里的主要
【写作思路】
活动。
1.本文为一篇说明文,介绍中秋节;
写作要点:
2.点名它是中国传统节日之一:
1.它是中国的传统节日之一:
3.活动主要是家人团聚、赏月、吃月饼,旅
2.家人团聚;
游访友及其他活动为辅;
3.赏月、吃月饼;
4.文章应使用一般现在时:
4.还有旅游、访友等其他活动。
5.介绍性文章,以第三人称为主。
注意:
【常用句式】
1.词数80左右;
1.The festival falls on...
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2....is the most important traditional
3.开头语已为你写好,不计入总词数。
festivals in...
The Mid-Autumn Festival
3.As one of the traditional Chinese
The Mid-Autumn Festival falls on the
festivals,it...
15th of the eighth month of our Chinese lunar
4.People celebrate...in order to...
calendar.
5.With the beautiful moon up in the sky,
we sit together and...
6.In addition,you will have a chance to
learn how to...
7.Besides,people in China will also hold
a variety of activities to...
8.The children are looking forward to...
9.What we love most is the time
when...
10.As...is drawing near,we often...
【范文示例】
The Mid-Autumn Festival
【审题立意】
The Mid-Autumn Festival falls on the
节日介绍属于说明文的范畴。说明文是
15th of the eighth month o f our Chinese lunar
以客观解说事物或事理为内容,以给人知识为
calendar.As one of the traditional Chinese
目的,以说明为表达方式的一种文体。本文要
festivals,it has been enjoying great popularity
介绍中秋节,要抓住中秋节的特征,有目的地
for its celebration of family reunion.
具体解说一些特色习俗,语言要通俗简洁,说
What we love most in the festival is the
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time we get together to enjoy the full moon,
的农历新年一春节。词数80左右。
which looks the brightest in the whole lunar
要点提示:
month.With the beautiful moon up in the
1.贴春联,放鞭炮,迎新年;
sky,we sit together and eat moon cakes and
2.阖家团圆,吃年夜饭,共同守岁;
fruit,sharing our stories.In addition to these
3.着新衣,互拜年,逛庙会。
traditional activities,we have a wider range of
参考词汇:paste up Spring Festival
choices such as travelling and visiting our
couplets贴春联the lunar calendar农历
relatives or friends.
firecracker鞭炮go to the temple fair逛庙会
【亮点点评】
The Spring Festival is one of the most
1.完整完成了介绍中秋节的任务,覆盖了
important traditional festivals in China.It falls
所有内容。
on
2.使用广泛的词汇来表达,如:tr