内容正文:
学习目标:训练提高综合写作的能力
学习重点:查找习作中的错误并修改
题目要求:
最近,你班同学就“太空探索是否值得”这一话题展开了一场讨论,请你根据下表提供的信息,用英语写一篇短文介绍讨论的情况。
30%的同学反对:1. 离我们及我们的日常生活太远;
2. 浪费金钱,这些金钱本可以用来解决饥饿,污染等问题。
70%的同学赞成:1. 已使用卫星进行通讯传播,天气预报等;2. 有望解决地球能源短缺问题.
要点词汇:
1. 某事值得做 sth. is worth doing 值得(花费金钱,时间)的 worthwhile
2. 日常生活 daily life
3. 饥饿 starvation
4. 卫星 satellite 通讯传播 communication
5. 天气预报 weather forecast
6. 能源短缺 energy shortages
1. There are 30% of the students think that space is worth exploring.
30% of the students think that space is worth exploring.
错误诊断:there be 句型使用错误, 汉语式英语
2. 70% students think that is worthwhile to explore space.
70% of the students think it is worthwhile to explore space.
错误诊断:百分比和名词之间要用of, of之后的名词要有the,that是从句标记,从句中要有主语
3. And had 30% the students are agree the idea of explore space.
30% of the students agree with the idea of exploring space.
错误诊断:have的用法错误
百分数后用of连接名词
sb agree with sb/sb’s idea
of是介词,后用名词或者动名词
Summary
写说明文或介绍性的文章时,时态要用现在时;注意句子结构, 尤其是主句、 从句结构要清晰;状语部分要使用恰当, 不要逐句翻译。
找出下面习作中的错误并修改,标注出你认为写得好的句子
The discussion of seeking the space
Today, our class had a discussion, which talk about if the seeking of the space have a worthwhile.
Those who are in favor of seeking the space claim that it has a lot of advantages. For example, the satellite was used to communication and the whether forecast, also the seeking could make the earth full of energy.
But some students who disagreed with it said: “ Maybe the seeking is right, but it’ s too far to know it in our daily life, the money used to seeking the space should be useds the deal with the starvation and the pollutions.
on my views, I think the seeking of the space is worthwhile to do it.
1. The discussion of seeking the space
Whether the space exploration worthwhile/Is space exploration worthwhile?/Is space worth exploring?
2. Today, our class had a discussion, which talk about if the seeking of the s