Unit 1 写作课课件2022-2023学年人教版八年级英语下册

writing Unit 1 What’s the matter? 1 你的朋友Jimmy由于长时间玩电脑游戏，保持同一个姿势太长时间，所以现在身体不适，出现了头痛、眼睛不舒服、腰背酸痛、无法移动脖子、感觉很累、睡眠质量差等情况。请写一篇英语短文给他提一些建议。内容包括： 你朋友身体不适的表现和原因（可适当发挥）； 你的建议； 你的感受。 作文要求： 不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名； 语句连贯，注意分段，80词左右。 2 你的朋友Jimmy由于长时间玩电脑游戏，保持同一个姿势太长时间，所以现在身体不适，出现了头痛、眼睛不舒服、腰背酸痛、无法移动脖子、感觉很累、睡眠质量差等情况。请写一篇英语短文给他提一些建议。内容包括： 你朋友身体不适的表现和原因（可适当发挥）； 你的建议； 你的感受。 { who what not feel well Jimmy, I 时态：一般现在时 人称：第一、三人称 why to give advice&feeling 3 para 2 描述身体不适的表现 并给出针对性的建议 para 1 开篇点题 点明某人身体不适及其原因 para 3 总结全文 画龙点睛 谋篇布局 4 useful expressions 身体不舒服 头痛 背痛 眼睛痛 做眼保健操 躺下来休息 not feel well/feel sick have a headache have a sore back have sore eyes do eye exercises lie down and rest 5 sentence patterns para 1: 开篇点题，点明某人身体不适及其原因 ... isn’t feel very well now, because... ... spends a lot of time..., so he... 6 sentence patterns para 2: 描述身体不适的表现，并给出针对性的建议 I think he should/shouldn’t... He’d better... I think he might have to... First... Next... Then... Finally... 7 sentence patterns para 3: 总结全文，画龙点睛 I think if he..., he will feel better soon. 8 linking words 并列：and 转折：but 因果：because, so 时间：first, after that, then 逻辑：besides(除此之外) what's more(而且) last but not least(最后但同样重要的是) 9 _________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ para 1: Jimmy身体不适的表现和原因 para 2：你的建议 para 3：你的感受 Have a try 10 It is bad for our body to play computer games for too long. My friend Jimmy likes playing computer games and always sits in the same way without moving， so he has a a headache, sore eyes and a sore back now. He can’t move his neck and he doesn’t have a good sleep at night, either. 写作范文 11 I think Jimmy should take breaks away from the computer first. Next, he should do eye exercises to relax his eyes and lie down to have a rest. Then, he might have to drink more water. Maybe h