专题11 书面表达12篇（第一期）-2023高考英语上海市名校模拟真题速递

2023高考英语上海市名校模拟真题速递 第一期 专题11 书面表达12篇 一、建议信 1．（2023·上海·模拟预测）Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假设你是明启中学高三学生李明，最近收到英国笔友Mike的邮件，其中提到因为父母工作原因，他们举家搬迁，他也转学到了一所新的学校，但是他因为换了一个环境感到不太适应。回复一封邮件，内容须包括： 1)分析导致他不适应的原因； 2)给他提出建议。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Mike, I am sorry to hear that you’re having trouble adjusting to your high school life. I understand it is hard to get used to your new school. Actually, anyone entering a strange environment will feel confused and lonely. The reaosn is that we are far away from our familiar surroundings. Besides, we are not sure whether we are popular in the new school and whether our new classmates are easy to get along with. However, you should not worry too much about these.    I’m writing to offer you some useful advice. Firstly, I recommend that you sign up for extra-curricular activities, which can help you make more new friends. In this way you won't feel lonely and your school life will become colorful and interesting. Secondly, you should make a good schedule and focus on improving your study. As a teenager, it is our responsibility to study well. I hope my suggestions will be suitable for you. I hope you can adapt quickly to the new environment. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本书面表达属于应用文写作。要求回复笔友邮件，分析他不适应新学校的原因并提出建议。 【详解】1.词汇积累 适应：adjust to→adapt to 此外：besides → what’s more 确定的：sure→certain 建议：advice→ suggestion 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Actually, anyone entering a strange environment will feel confused and lonely. 拓展句：Actually, anyone who enters a strange environment will feel confused and lonely. 【