2023年中考英语写作专题之修改策略课件

英语中考写作技巧 之 修改策略 著名教育家孔子曾经说过：“学而不思则罔”。古往今来，凡是有大成就的人都是善于思考的人。假设你是Tina，你将要参加市里的英文报社举办的征文比赛，请你根据下面提供的信息，以“To Be a Good Thinker”为题写一篇英语短文。 内容包括： 1. 你的一次因为思考而受益的经历； 2. 怎样养成善于思考的习惯（不少于2条）； 3. 呼吁身边的人都养成善于思考的习惯。 作文要求：1. 不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。 2. 语句连贯，词数80个左右。作文的标题和开头已经给出，不计入总词数。 To Be a Good Thinker Just as the famous educator Confucius said, “It is no use learning without thinking.” We all know thinking has great power. ____________________________________ 题目 Part I Lead-in The other day, while reading an article, I met with a sentence which was difficult to understand. Instead of asking for help, I read the article once more and thought over and over again. At last, I not only knew more words, but also got a better understanding of the whole article. 润色后 Just as the famous educator Confucius said, “It is no use learning without thinking.” We all know thinking has great power. Once when I read an article, I met with a sentence. I didn't understand it. I didn’t ask for help. I read the article once more and thought hard. At last, I knew its meaning completely. Part I Lead-in Part II Presentation 写作中常见错误 拼写 语法 句法 标点符号 …… Find out the mistakes in the following sentences and correct them. I climed slowly and was very tired. I found sth interesting. 2. On a friday afternoon, I went shopping. 3. What a crazy day it was, I will remember it forever. 4. I thought it is hungry. 5. My mother always tidy up my room. 6. In my father’s help, I became more patient than before. climbed something Friday ! was tidies With spelling Capital letter(大小写） Punctuation(标点符号） Tense（时态） Phrases（短语和固定搭配） Verb agreement（主谓一致） 7. We played snow in front of house. 8. It is tired work. 9. One Sunday morning, I went to the park by bus and sat beside me was a girl. Missing words（漏词） Using wrong word（选词错误） Chinglish（中式英语） with the house tiring I went to the park on a bus and there was a girl sitting besid