第2部分 专题6 第2节 读后续写的技法指导（教师用书word）-2023大二轮【导学教程】老高考英语专题辅导与训练

I was glad that I finally got the payment after working hard for two weeks. (首句肯定是“我”拿到了辛苦工作2周后的报酬) 2．续写首段尾句与给出的次段首句的衔接 “Three hundred dollars, but we just had two hundred left.”(次段首句写“我”立刻明白了父母的担忧，所以本句应该写出父母忧虑的是什么) 3．给出的次段首句与续写次段首句的衔接 Really, the truck my dad drove often broke down on the way，which made my dad in trouble.(次段首句首先写出父母所担忧的是什么) 4．文章结尾升华与文章主题意义的衔接 That night, before I went to bed, I thought I would tell the farmer the next day that I would continue my work; after all I grew up.(照应原文最后一段的最后一句话，同时突出主题：明白了爸爸说的长大的意义就是懂得奉献和牺牲) [续写成文] The pay day arrived at last. I was glad that I finally got the payment after working hard for two weeks. While walking back home with an excited mind, I conceived many plans about how to dispose of it. I needed a new football because the old one we played had already worn out. I intended to purchase my favorite chocolates. Upon approaching the house, I noticed my dad and mom standing beside the old truck, looking sad. It seemed as if something unpleasant happened. “How much do we still need to pay for a new truck？” asked my mother. “Three hundred dollars, but we just had two hundred left.” I understood immediately what my parents were worried about. Really, the truck my dad drove often broke down on the way, which made my dad in trouble. My parents had intended to buy a new truck but couldn't afford it. Suddenly, I realized what I should do. Stepping forward, I said, “Dad, here is what I received for my work. I think it would help you a little.” A little surprised at what I said, my mom hugged me tightly. That night, before I went to bed, I thought I would tell the farmer the next day that I would continue my work; after all I grew up. 技法三　精细打磨语言 构思好续写情节以后，下一步就是进行续写。在阅卷时，阅卷老师首要关注的是续写的语言，因此续写语言的高低与否直接决定着续写的成功与否。首先要规避常见错误，确保拿到及格分，再次要尽力提升写作的语言，努力达到最高档。 方法一　5大升级路径，词汇亮人一眼 升级路径1：笼统词→具体词 ①Because of her hatred, she looked at him. →Because of her hatred, she glared at him. ②They walked onwards with exhausted bodies through the desert.