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第三部分
写作
专题六
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第二讲
双线深耕——提升表达•写作技法
第三节
提升表达3——环境描写
一、感官
(一)视觉
enormous/gigantic/immense/vast 巨大的;tiny 极小的;sparkling/ twinkling/glittering 闪闪发光的;dim 昏暗的;lofty 高耸入云的;steep 险峻的;narrow 狭窄的;winding 蜿蜒的;feathery 鹅毛般的;foggy 雾蒙蒙的;misty 有雾的;sunny 有太阳的;dark 黑暗的
1.The __________ pagoda stands like a giant at the top of the mountain.
巍巍宝塔屹立在山巅。
2.An oak tree cast its shadow over a ________ round pool.
一棵橡树在一个小圆池塘上投下了它的影子。
3.The town is perched on the edge of a _________, precipitous cliff.
该镇坐落在一个陡峭的悬崖边上。
4.At night, the ________ streets become menacing.
在夜晚,漆黑的街道变得阴森森的。
5.The tide was going out, and the sand was smooth and ___________ ____________________.
潮水正在退去,沙滩平坦,闪闪发亮。
lofty
tiny
steep
dark
glittering/
twinkling/sparkling
(二)触觉
hard 硬的;soft/gentle 轻柔的;burning/scorching 火辣辣的;icy/freezing 冰冷的;biting/bonechilling 刺骨的;warm 温暖的;wet/damp 潮湿的;silky 丝滑的;sharp 尖锐的;rough 粗糙的;bumpy 崎岖不平的;shaggy 蓬乱的;wooden 木质的
1.The sunlight kissed the ________ stones.
阳光洒落在温暖的石块上。
2.The grass was ____________ with early morning dew.
清晨的露水使得青草湿漉漉的。
3.Newlybuilt ____________ cottages line the street.
街道两旁是新建的木屋。
4.The __________ rock walls were like the sides of a deep canal.
粗糙的岩壁就像一条很深的运河的两岸。
5.This creature's fur is short, dense and __________.
这种动物的毛短、浓密而且柔顺。
warm
wet/damp
wooden
rough
silky
(三)听觉
a low voice小声;a high voice 大声;noisy 吵闹的;deafening 震耳欲聋的;howling 怒号的;猛烈的;melodious 悦耳的;gurgling 潺潺的(流水);whisper 低语
1.She leaned over and ______________ something in his ear.
她探过身去附耳跟他说了些什么。
2.She has a ________ voice.
她嗓音很大。
3.The wind was __________ around the house.
狂风在房子四周呼啸。
4.We could hear the stream ____________ down in the valley.
我们可以听到溪水流过山谷的潺潺流水声。
5.A group of __________ children tumbled out of the bus.
一群吵吵嚷嚷的孩子一窝蜂地下了公共汽车。
whispered
high
howling
gurgling
noisy
(四)嗅觉
smelly/foul/stinky 臭的;难闻的;fragrant 芳香的;fresh 新鲜的;sweet 香的;strong 强烈的;choking 让人窒息的;rotten 腐烂的
1.Dense smoke swirled and billowed, its rank fumes __________ her.
浓密的烟雾盘旋翻腾,刺鼻的烟味使她窒息。
2.The air was