内容正文:
Unit 1 Past and present.
单元话题满分范文必背
1.《苏州日报》正在举行“疫情带来了什么”主题征文比赛,请根据以下内容提示,用英语写一篇短文来描述疫情给我们的城市和个人带来的变化。
以前
现在
城市
著名园林 旅游胜地
避免扎堆 线上游园...
个人
(自拟1-2点)
习惯排队 阅读拓展...
感受
变化巨大...
1. 词数:90左右;
2. 文章开头已给出,不计入总词数。
3 文中不得出现与考生相关的真实姓名, 校名等信息;照抄阅读语篇不得分。
参考生词: 疫情 epidemicThe epidemic broke out suddenly and everything seemed to stop.
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【答案】例文
The epidemic broke out suddenly and everything seemed to stop.
Suzhou has been world-famous for its gardens for long and it used to welcome many visitors. But now, the government has asked people to aviod getting together. As a result, many people try to take an online tour of the beautiful gardens instead. Isn’t that wonderful?
I didn’t obey rules at school in the past. However, After learning about good manners, I realized my problems. Recently, I have been used to queuing for my turn and reading to relax. Books really open up a whole new world to me.
Both our city and I have changed a lot, but I believe everything will change for the best soon.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇材料作文,为一篇征文;
② 时态:时态为“一般过去时、一般现在时以及现在完成时”;
③ 提示:写作提示内容已经给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“以前的个人情况”,需要自拟补充。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表面写作的意图,借用开头所给内容来引出本写作话题;
第二部,具体阐述写作内容,从城市、个人等方面介绍以前和现在的对比;
第三步,书写结语,表达自己的感受并给予新的希望。
[亮点词汇]
① be world-famous for 因……而世界著名
② avoid doing 避免做某事
③ be used