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►专题09 上海高考夹叙夹议类作文
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考点精讲
【考情链接】
夹叙夹议文是一种比较常见的写作文体, 以记人叙事为主, 记叙人物的经历或事物/事件发生、发展、变化的过程。兼有总结全文,深化主题。材料常涉及社会生活现象、人物或自然景物。无论记人还是叙事都要通过叙述、描写来加以表达, 把人物的经历或行为、发生的事情/事件用一定的顺序和语言技巧叙述出来。在叙述过程中“人以事显, 事由人生”, 人和事是密不可分的。在一篇记叙文中记人、写景、叙事往往是交织在一起的, 不能简单地分裂开。高考作文一般都不会单纯的记叙某事,而是夹叙夹议。
围绕主题开展叙述、讨论—结论段(结尾部分Concluding paragraph)对全文的总结和概括。
论说文的类型通常有:观点对比型、问题解决型、道理/观点论证型、说明利弊型等,各类型的论证方式有相异之处,每一种类型都有相对固定的论证方式及句型。值得注意的是近年试题中经常出现记叙与结论相结合的叙议形式。
【典例剖析】
【上海市南模中学2022-2023学年高三上学期开学考】
假设你是李华,你要竞选学校模拟联合国社团主席,请写一篇竞选演讲稿,内容包括:
1.你认为自己具备什么条件
2.如果当选,你会为大家做什么
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【答案】Ladies and gentlemen, I’m Li Hua,I’m now running for the position of being the chairman of the Model United Nations Club.
I’m sure I can do the job well. To begin with, communicating with others is not a problem for me, which makes me work efficiently. Moreover, I used to be the chairman of the Students’ Union of my high school, and I believe such experience will help a lot. The last but not least, being friends with many exchange students from all over the world allows me to know more about different cultures.
If I become the chairman, I will try my best to unite every single club and hold meaningful activities, which will enrich our school life. Thank you for your listening!
【解析】
【导语】本文是一篇应用文。要求考生写一篇演讲稿来竞选模拟联合国社团主席的职位。
【详解】1.词汇积累
帮助:help→assist
首先:to begin with→first of all
此外:moreover → what’s more/besides
最后:the last but not least→ at last/above all/in the end
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I’m Li Hua,I’m now running for