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►专题07 上海高考图画类作文
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考点精讲
【考情链接】
图画类作文是材料作文的一种特殊形式,是一种变“画”为文的作文方式。这种题型提供给考生的是图画,要求考生在看懂图画意思后写作文,主要训练和考查考生的观察力、思考力、创造力和表达能力。素材贴近生活。图画类的书面表达一般都是中学生所熟悉的场景;画面生动形象,具有趣味性,体现高考书面表达“生活化”的特点。有时候还附带有英语或汉语说明,考生易获得直观信息。文体形式多样。值得注意的是图画式作文主要有记叙文、说明文和议论文。
【要点梳理】
· 写作结构指导
第一段(para.I):描述图表所显示的内容,引出需要描述的核心部分,不一定要面面俱到。
第二段(Para.II):提炼图片中所反映的核心问题,对此提岀自己的看法并加以论证说明。
第三段(Para.III):总结全文,或提出解决问题的方法和希望,或进行鼓励和号召。
1.描述图片内容的常用句式
From the picture, we can see that....
It can be easily seen from the picture that....
As is vividly portrayed (depicted /...) in the drawing, ...
What we can't help noticing from the picture is that...
2.阐明图片内涵意义的句式
Simple as it seems, this picture does showcase (reveal/show...) a common phenomenon that...
Laughable at first glance, the drawing actually conveys the message to us that...
The picture serves to remind us of a common social phenomenon that...
It is quite obvious that the drawer of this picture wants to draw our attention towards / to sth.
Beneath this picture there is thought-provoking fact that...
3.表达结论的常用句式
It is safe to draw the conclusion that...
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that...
In conclusion, it is a wake-up call for sb. to do sth.
Now, after careful analysis, it is not difficult to miss the point that
【典例剖析】
Guided Writing
1) describe the drawing briefly,
2) explain its intended meaning, and
3) give your comments.
【写作思路】
本图片的内容比较好解读——人们对美机产生了严重依赖,但在解读深层次的内涵时,考生需要朝"科技是一把双刃剑"这个宏观的问题论述。即∶科技在为生活带来便捷的同时,也给人们的生活带来了不好的影响,人们越来越依赖手机、虚拟社交网络,以至于我们忽略了人与人之间的面对面交流。
【参考范文】
The picture shows a group of young people sitting around a dinner table. Rather than eating the food, they are absorbed in their phones What the picture convey is that people are now so attached to their phones that they neglect the people around them.
As the saying goes,"Technology is a double-edged sword." 'There's no doubt that thanks to the great advances