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Section Ⅳ Writing——读后续写
一、读后续写题型解读见本书P33
二、写作原则
1.原文一致原则
内容要前后衔接,上下连贯,语言表达风格一致。
2.正能量原则
基于故事发展(故事线+感情线)预测正能量结局。一定要正能量,弘扬社会主义核心价值观。如迷路了但最终一定回到了家;失败了或遇到困难了,但最终一定成功了;吵架了但最后一定是言归于好,和睦相处;犯错了,最后一定会改过自新,重新做人;贼逃了,最后一定是绳之以法,等等。
3.曲折性原则
凡是故事都应有跌宕起伏的情节,其中人物会遇到困难或问题,但最终能解决。
三、写作步骤
1.读懂大意,理清脉络
读所给的不完整故事,弄清大意和主题,理清故事的主要人物和事件。
2.细读首句,构思框架
仔细阅读所给两段的首句,结合正能量结尾,思考大致框架。
3.增加细节,开始写作
根据“所见(遇)所想,所为所感”等构思具体细节。
4.修改润色,整洁誊写
思考再三,把修正润色后的续写整洁地写入答卷。
四、典例研析
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
A farmer grew some vegetables in his garden.One day his wife was ill and he had no money.He had to sell some cabbages and carrots in the market.The next morning he took two baskets of vegetables to town.But it was raining hard that afternoon and there were few people in the street.When his vegetables were sold out, it was dark.He bought some medicine and hurried to his village.
On his way home he saw a person lying on the snow.He placed his baskets on the ground and was going to help the person to get up.At that time he found it was a dead man and there was much blood on his body.He was so afraid that he ran away quickly, without taking the baskets with him.
The next afternoon the farmer was sent to the police station.
Having shown the baskets, an officer asked,“Are these yours?”“Yes, sir,”the farmer answered timidly (胆怯地).
“Have you killed the man?”
“No, no, sir,”the farmer said in a hurry.
“When did you see the dead man?”
“About seven last evening.”
“Did you see who killed the man?”“No, sir.”
The officer brought out a knife and asked,“Have you seen it yet?”“No, sir.”The officer became angry and told the policeman to beat him up and send him into prison.The officer wanted to trap the farmer into the confession (供认), but the farmer didn't admit he was the murderer.
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The officer was so angry that he asked the policeman to beat him up again.
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The farmer was lucky.A few days later,