话题14 烦恼和沟通-2022-2023学年八年级【飞跃英语】话题写作

飞跃英语·话题写作八年级 话题14 烦恼和沟通 话题分析 本话题为“烦恼和沟通”。讲述在学校、生活中遇到的各种烦恼及相应建议。对于初中生来 说，“烦恼”是一个经常接触到的话题。 和该话题有关的书面表达常见的命题形式是“诉说烦恼”和“给出建议”。写作时，用“should/, could/,why don't you../why not../what about./how about..”提出建议；用“I agree that./I believe that./I think../n my opinion..”阐述观点与理由。 经典范例 【写作任务】 宽容是一种美德。人与人之间难免会有磕磕绊绊。面对矛盾，多一份包容和凉解，生活就会 多一缕阳光。 某英文网站正在开展以“包容和凉解”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短 文投稿，谈谈生活中你原谅他人的一次经历。 要点：1.你们之间发生了什么事； 2.你为什么原谅他/她； 3.原谅他/她之后你的感受。 要求：1.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称； 2.词数100左右。 提示词语：forgive(原谅) 【思路点拨】 审题：1.定体裁：记叙文； 2.定时态：一般过去式； 3.定人称：第一人称。 布局： Wh&atha ppened即 Ti Kai broke my pen. A Story About My father said... Advice Before I went to bed,I thought a lot. Forgiveness How I felt happy 【范文】 I still remember what happened between my best friend Li Kai and me. About five days ago.I showed my favorite pen to him.He asked me to lend it to him Although/Though I wasn't happy.I still lent it to him because he was my best friend.But the AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA ·40· 话题14烦恼和沟通 next day.he told me that the pen was broken when he did his homework with it.I got so angry that I didn't talk to him the whole day. When I got home.I told it to my father,but my father said I shouldn't be angry with Li Kai.Before I went to bed.I thought a lot.Finally.I chose to forgive him.Because I thought nothing was more important than friendship.What's more,I became very happy after I forgave him. 三 素材积累 【短语箱】 be angry with sb. 对某人生气 get into a fight with sb.与某人吵架 get on well with classmates与同学和睦相处 communicate with parents与父母交流 too much homework太多的家庭作业 be good for对.…有好处 look through快速查看；浏览 work out成功地发展：解决 argue with sb. 与某人争吵 instead of代替 compete with sb.与某人竞争 cut out 删除；删去 compare...with 比较；对比 in one's opinion依.…看 hang over笼罩；挂在.之上 【句式链】 ①Glad to hear from you,butI'm sorry to..很高兴收到你的来信，但很抱歉. 2 We all have some problems and stress in our lives..在我们的生活中，我们都有一些问题和压力。 ③I know you are upset these days.我知道你这些天很沮丧。 ④Here is some of my advice for you.这里有一些建议给你。 ⑤I don't think you need to buy an expensi