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飞跃英语·话题写作八年级
话题12志愿活动
话题分析
本话题为“志愿活动(Volunteering)”,写作时可运用本单元所学的动词短语及动词不定式来增
加表述的多样性。
本话题常见的命题形式是写以“志愿服务”为主题的短文。写作中,用clean up,fix up,cheer
up,give out,call up等动词短语来描述向他人提供帮助的情况;用I could./I want to..等句型来表示
自己向他人提供帮助和从事公益活动的意愿。
经典范例
【写作任务】
助人为乐是中华民族的美德,作为中学生我们应该乐于助人。请以“Helping Others Makes Me
Hppy”为题,写一篇100词左右的短文,与我们分享一下你做好人好事的感受。
【思路点拨】
审题:1.定体裁:应用文;
2.定时态:一般现在时;
3.定人称:第一人称。
布局:
话题点出
We all know that everyone needs help.So...
I often help to clean up....I feel comfortable.
事例感受
I usually help the old...
I really feel happy.…
观,点总结
I think if people help each other,our world will be...
【范文】
We all know that everyone needs help.So help is necessary to every one of us.As for me.
I often help to dean up the dassroom to keep the dassroom dean.When I sit in the nice and
comfortable dassroom,I feel comfortable.In my neighborhood,I usually help the old hold the
heavy things while walking together with them.I really feel happy when they say thanks to me.
I want to do more for people around.I think if people help each other.our world will
be a big family full of love.
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话题12志愿活动
素材积累
【短语箱】
pay a visit
参观:拜访
do some cleaning打扫卫生
cheer sb.up使某人振奋;使某人高兴
take an active part in积极参与
help out with sth.
帮助解决某事
give away
赠送;捐赠
run out of用尽;用完
come up with
想出:提出
care for/,look after/,take care of关心;照顾
from now on从现在起
a strong feeling of satisfaction
强烈的满足感
make a difference
影响;有作用
give out
分发;散发
put off
推迟
put up张贴
call up
打电话给(某人):征召
try out
参加…选拔;适用
fix up修理;装饰
take after(外貌或行为)像
set up建起;设立
【句式链】
①Hi,I am a middle school student.你好,我是一名中学生。
2 I'd like to tell you my volunteering plans.我想告诉你我的志愿计划。
③We took part in a voluntary activity in our school last Sunday.上周日,我参加了学校的志愿者活动。
④I often help my classmates with their schoolwork.我常常在学业上帮助我的同学。
⑤We helped them with..我在…帮助他们。
⑥SoI'm very popular there.因此,我在那里很受欢迎。
⑦Do you agree with me?你同意我的意见吗?
⑧What a meaningful day we have!我们度过了多么有意义的一天啊!
9Love is the best stage for volunteers,and dedication is the most beautiful language for volu