话题11 谈论健康和事故-2022-2023学年八年级【飞跃英语】话题写作

话题11谈论健康和事故 话题11谈论健康和事故 话题分析 本话题为“谈论健康和事故(Talk about health problems and accidents)”。我们要学会描述生活 中存在的健康问题，并就这些问题提出建议；学会描述意外伤害事故，并给出合理的应对措施。 本话题在中考中经常涉及，通常是根据某一健康问题或意外事故给出自己的建议。在写作 中，要合理使用stomachache,fever,cough等表示疾病的词汇，使文章用词准确得当；正确使用“You should.”,“You shouldn't.”以及“It's best for you to.”句式结构，可使习作句式丰富多彩。另外， because of,take some medicine等短语的使用也可显示出作者良好的英语功底。 经典范例 【写作任务】 假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Mik最近因视力减退而感到不安，请你用英文给他写封电子邮 件，谈谈你在保护视力方面的一些做法。要，点如下： 1.经常做户外活动；2.减少用电子产品：3.坚持做眼保健操；4.… 注意：1.词数100左右： 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.文中不能出现与本人相关的信息； 4.开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。 Dear Mike, I'm sorry to learn that your eyesight is getting weaker. Yours, Li Hua 【思路点拨】 审题：1.定体裁：应用文； 2.定时态：一般现在时； 3.定人称：第一人称。 布局： 开篇点题 'd like to share.… 保护视力 do physical exereise 的方法 reduce the time spent on the mobile phone and the compuler 总结全文 I hope you'll find my ways helpful ·31· 飞跃英语·话题写作八年级 【范文】 Dear Mike, I'm sorry to learn that your eyesight is getting weaker.I'd like to share some ways of protecting eyesight in my daily life with you. At school,I often go out of the dassroom to play with my dassmates or do physical exercise during the breaks.In my free time,I also try hard to reduce the time spent on the mobile phone and the computer.You know,the light they give off is harmful to our eyes. Besides,doing eye exercises plays an important role in relaxing my tired eyes.Lastly.I usually have my eyes examined every term to make sure my eyes stay healthy. I hope you'll find my ways helpful. Yours, Li Hua 三 素材积累 【短语箱】 have a cold感冒 have a stomachache胃痛 lie down躺下 take one's temperature 量体温 have a fever 发烧 take breaks/,take a break休息 to one's surprise 出乎…的意料 right away立即；马上 get into trouble陷入困境 be used to 习惯于…；适应于… take risks/take a risk冒险 run out 用尽；耗尽 cut off切除 get out of离开；从…出来 be in control of掌管；管理 give up放弃 make a decision 做决定 thanks to 多亏 think twice再三考虑 keep on doing sth. 坚持做某事 do exercise 做运动 have a healthy diet有健康的饮食习惯 too much太多 stay up too late熬夜到很晚 be good for 对…有益 as possible as we can尽我们所能 spend a lot of time花费很多时间