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话题14·校园生活心
话题14校园生活
话题分析
本话题为“校园生活(School days)”,与之相关的话题作文主要是回忆自己的校园生活,谈论
自己在读书生涯中最感激的人、毕业典礼等,这是非常贴近学生学习生活的话题之一,尤其是对于
初三学生来讲,需要面临毕业分别问题,回忆校园生活是每个学生都有亲身感受与体验的。写作
时可根据具体要求或提示,对校园生活进行介绍或者回忆。
本话题常见的命题形式主要是回忆自己的校园生活,谈论同窗好友及毕业典礼等。在写作
时,合理安排文章结构,包括描述事件或人物、自己的感受等。合理使用定语从句,如①There are a
lot of people who I should be...②One of them is my deskmate who..等,使自己的作文语言丰富,更具
可读性。
经典范例
【写作任务】
初中三年的学习生活让人难忘,毕业之际,你校将举行以“感恩”为主题的英文演讲比赛,请你
根据以下提示,写一篇英文演讲稿。
要点:1.感谢父母,教我如何生活
2.感谢老师,教我许多知识…
3.感谢同学,给我美好回忆…
要求:1.词数100左右,开头和结尾已给出(不计入总词数);
2.可适当增减词汇,使语句流畅、完整;
3.文中不能透露个人真实信息。
Good morning,everyone.I'm glad to be here to speak in front of you.Herel'd like to thank
everyone of you.
That's all.Thank you.
【思路点拨】
审题:1.定体栽:应用文(演讲稿);
2.定时态:一般过去时、一般现在时;
3.定人称:第一人称、第二人称。
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飞跃英语·话题写作中考版—。
布局:
点明主题
I want to say thanks to...
parents:take good care of me:encourage me and cheer me up
感谢的人
teachers:teach me so well:encourage me to keep trying
物及原因
classmates:help me a lot
重中主题
I'll remember all of you.
【范文】
Good morning.everyone.I'm glad to be here to speak in front of you.Here I'd like to
thank everyone of you.How time flies!We'll graduate soon.At this moment,I want to say
thanks to my parents,my teachers and my dassmates.
Dear dad and mom.you've taken good care of me in the past three years.When I was
in trouble.you used to encourage me and cheer me up.
Dear teachers,thank you for teaching me so well.I still remember when I failed in an
exam,you encouraged me to keep trying.Because of your help,I have made much progress.
Dear dassmates,you've helped me a lot in my studies since I came to this school.I
never forget the days when we studied together.
Words can't show my thanks to you!I'll remember all of you.
That's all.Thank you.
素材积累
【短语箱】
say thanks to
向…道谢
take good care of好好照顾
cheer me up
让我高兴/振作起来
make progress
取得进步
give me some advice
给我一些建议
remember doing记得做过
overcome fear
克服恐惧
meet the standards of.达到…的标准
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【句式链】
①How time flies!光阴似箭!
②You taught me how to…你教会我如何……
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