话题14 描述动物-2022-2023学年七年级【飞跃英语】话题写作

话题14描述动物 话题14措述动物 话题分析 本话题为“描述动物”，围绕这一话题表达自己对动物的喜爱之情并学习特殊疑问句及描述动 物特征的形容词。此话题可以考查学生对记叙文、说明文、议论文、应用文（日记、海报）等不同文 体的写作能力。 经典范例 【写作任务】 假设Tom和Jeny正在谈论他们最喜欢的动物。请你根据下表，用英语描述Tom和Jenny各 自喜欢的动物，并解释原因。词数50左右。 Name Favorite animals Reasons Tom pandas quiet,very cute Jenny elephants kind of smart 【思路点拨】 审题：1.确定体裁：要求介绍各自喜欢的动物，应为记叙文； 2.确定时态：采用一般现在时； 3.确定人称：用第三人称。 布局： 引出话题 ..talking about... Favorile Tom's favorite animals are... Animals 主题部分 Jenny's favorite animals are... 文章结尾 ...animals arc pcople's fricnds. 【范文】 Tom and Jenny are talking about their favorite animals.Tom's favorite animals are pandas.They live in China.They are black and white.Tom likes pandas best because he thinks they are very quiet and cute.Jenny's favorite animals are elephants.She thinks that elephants are kind of smart. They both like animals very much because they think animals are people's friends. .41 飞跃英语·话题写作七年级 三 素材积累 【短语箱】 many kinds of许多种类的 like.best最喜欢 be friendly/cute/lazy友好的/可爱的/懒惰的 the symbol of..…的象征 kind of稍微；有点儿 try one's best to do sth.尽某人最大努力做某事 【句式链】 ①I like.best.我最喜欢… ②What's your favorite animal?你最喜欢的动物是什么？ ③I like..because it's/they're very..我喜欢…因为它/它们很.… ④Pandas are from China..熊猫来自中国。 ⑤t's a symbol of...它是…的象征。 四 佳作欣赏 假如中国国宝大熊猫是你最喜爱的动物，请以“My Favorite Animal-一Giant Pandas'”为题，根据 下面提示写一篇短文，词数60左右。内容包括： 1.你为什么喜欢它们(cute,friendly),它们来自哪里(China); 2.它们有哪些特征(white and black fur,short tail,round ears); 3.特，点和爱好(lazy,bamboo,climb trees); 4.大熊猫是中国国宝(national treasure),是友谊(friendship)的象征，目前仅存约20O0只，因此 我们要尽力保护(protect)它们。 My Favorite Animal-Giant Pandas 1There are many kinds of animals in the world,but I like pandas best.They are from China.2I like pandas because they are cute and friendly.3 They have white and black fur.4And they have a short tail and round ears.They are lovely.5 They look kind of lazy and shy.They like eating bamboo.They also like dimbing trees.Giant pandas are China's national treasure.6 They are the symbol of friendship. There are only about 2.000 pandas now.7We must try our