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飞跃英语·话题写作中考版
话题5介绍物品
话题分析
本话题为“介绍物品”,与之相关的话题作文主要是描述物品,侧重物品的制造地、用途及独特
性的介绍。这是非常贴近学生学习和生活的话题之一,写作时可根据具体要求或提示,对相关的
物品进行介绍。
本话题常见的命题形式主要是要求从物品的制造地、用途及独特性等方面介绍一件物品。在
写作时,根据以上提到的三个方面来合理布局文章,使文章内容充实、层次清晰;尽量使用定语从
句及被动语态,如:①.a city which is..②.pictures which fit..③be used as(④be invented by从而使
文章精练、重点突出、语言丰富,更具可读性。
经典范例
【写作任务】
假设你叫李华,来自山东省潍坊市。你的加拿大笔友Marcus得知潍坊是风筝之乡,他对风筝
很感兴趣,于是他给你发来一封电子邮件,想让你给他介绍一些风筝的相关情况。请你根据下面
的要,点提示给他回复邮件。
要点:1.风筝的象征意义;
2.原材料:竹子、纸或布或塑料(plastic)、细绳(string);
3.用途:过去用于送信,现在用来娱乐和锻炼。
【思路点拔】
审题:1.定体裁:应用文(邮件内容为说明文);
2.定时态:一般现在时;
3.定人称:第三人称。
布局:
be Tamous for
引出所描述的物品
象征意义
people's wishes for a better life
详细介绍
原材料
be made of
用途
be used for
【范文】
Dear Marcus,
How are you doing these days?I'm excited to hear from you.I'd like to tell you
something about kites in my city.
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话题5介绍物品
My city,Weifang in Shandong Province,is famous for its kites.An international kite
festival is held here in April every year.Kites are loved by lots of people because they rise
into the air with people's wishes for a better life.They are usually made of bamboo.paper or
doth or plastic and string.There are all kinds of kites and they are often painted with colorful
drawings.And kites here often have special designs.People used kites to send a message in
the old days.Today,they are used for fun and exercise.
Welcome to my city!I hope you will fly a kite here!
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
三
素材积累
【短语箱】
be made of由…制成
be made in产自…
the symbol of
…的象征
think of想起
be famous for
因…著名
be used for被用于…
as we all know众所周知
stand for代表
bring people good luck给人们带来好运
in the shape of..以…的形状
what's more
另外
not only...but also...
不但…而且
became more and more popular
be worth doing...
值得做…
变得越来越受欢迎
have a long history有着悠久的历史
be fond of...喜爱…
【句式链】
①It is deeply loved by people of all ages.它深受各个年龄段人们的喜爱。
2 Kites are used for fun and exercise now.现在风筝被用于娱乐和锻炼。
③They are used at festivals and other celebrations..它们被用于节日和其他庆祝活动。
④They are made of bamboo and paper.它们由竹子和纸制成。
⑤/They are made in different shapes..它们