话题4 成长变化-2022-2023学年九年级【飞跃英语】话题写作

飞跃英语·话题写作中考版 话题4成长变化 话题分析 本话题为“成长变化”，与之相关的话题作文主要是谈论自身的改变，这是非常贴近学生学习 和生活的话题之一。对于这一语题，每个学生都有亲身感受与体验。写作时可根据具体要求或提 示，对自身的改变进行描述。 本话题常见的命题形式主要是介绍自身的改变、描述这些改变是如何产生的。在写作时，合 理使用表示承接的连接词therefore,however等，这会使行文流畅、生动、层次清晰；尽量使用表达个 人感受的句式，如：①It's difficult to.②..suffer a lot from..③It helps me..④I used to..等，使自己 的作文语言丰富，更具可读性。 经典范例 【写作任务】 时光荏苒，初中三年转瞬即逝。跟三年前的自己相比较，你会有很多变化。请以“I Have Changed a Lot”为题，根据以下要，点与要求，用英语写一篇短文，具体描述你最重要的变化及其是如 何发生的。 要点：l.What did you use to be like? 2.What is the most important change? 3.And how did it happen? 要求：1.短文不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分； 2.不少于100词。 I Have Changed a Lot 【思路点拨】 审题：1.定体裁：记叙文； 2.定时态：一般现在时；一般过去时； 3.定人称：第一人称 布局： 引出话题 have changed a lot used to be really short and thin; used to be shy and quict; 过去的情况 was always silent in class there was an English speech in our school: I was afraid; our English teacher encouraged me; won the lirst prize in the speech conlest; 变化的起因 felt very proud and happy 现在的表现 become more oulgoing 10· 话题4成长变化 【范文】 I Have Changed a Lot! How time flies!Three years has passed.Of course.I have changed a lot.Let me show you my changes. I used to be really short and thin,and I used to be shy and quiet.I was always silent in dass.But now I have changed a lot.One of my most important changes is that I become more outgoing.What made me change a lot? I remember when I was in Grade Eight.there was an English speech contest in our school.I wanted to take part in it,but I was afraid.Our English teacher,Mr.Wang. encouraged me to take part in it.He gave me a lot of advice,and I practiced a lot every day. Finally,I won the first prize in the speech contest.I felt very proud and happy.Since then. I have become more outgoing. 素材积累 【短语箱】 used to过去常常 shy and quiet害羞而文静 one of one's most important changes more outgoing 更加外向 某人的最重大改变之一 take part in参加 be afraid of... 害怕… encourage sb.to do sth. 鼓励某人做某事 change a lot改变很大 take pride in... 对…引以为豪 be poor in不擅长 believe in相信；信任 feel like感觉 used to be... 过去是… in the past在过去 play chess下国际象棋 fall