内容正文:
如何写好读后续写
张国均
读后续写题型的语篇多为日常故事
主题:
人物:
情节:
环境:
灵 魂
核 心
骨 架
背 景
构思及创作的过程中,应注意以下几点:
1. 续写内容应围绕故事主题展开,在结尾处可以适当照应主题,升华主旨。
2. 故事情节与原文紧密联系,保持连贯,照应前文。
3. 续写故事需承接前文对主次人物的塑造,展现人物间关系的发展,解决矛盾。
4. 根据前文和首句的环境提示,设置恰当故事场景,多个场景时注意衔接。
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
A MOTHER'S DAY SURPRISE
The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother's Day. How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge (粥). They had watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do.
The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 a.m. The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen. They decided to boil the porridge first. They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast. Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk.Jenna found the bread and put two sl