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第18讲书面表达之应用文讲与练
【学习目标】
1.熟悉写作类型
2.掌握写作技巧
【基础知识】
高分亮点塑造
要想写出一篇水平比较高的书面表达,高级词汇的使用必不可少,它会大大提升文章的档次,从而帮助获得高分。要做到准确使用高级词汇,应该注意以下几个方面:
—— (一)使用亮点词汇的四种方法 ——
1.标新立异 “语”众不同
在写作时,恰当地使用一些别人可能意想不到的词汇或表达,会体现出自己的高水平。
①Our team, besides regular training, will join in a variety of activities.
→Our team, apart/aside from regular training, will join in a variety of activities.
②Several days later, when the video was played at the graduation ceremony, it was very popular.
→Several days later, when the video was played at the graduation ceremony, it was wellreceived.
2.多样表达 避免重复
在写作时应尽量避免重复使用相同的单词或短语,要尽量用贴切、多样的词语来展示自己的水平。用词不同、表达方式迥异,也是高级用法。
③We may have different opinions in organizing class activities. We may have different ways to deal with such a situation.
→We may have different opinions in organizing class activities. We may have various ways to deal with such a situation.
④We've built a new experiment building and we've also built a library where the old playground used to be.
→We've built a new experiment building and we've also set up a library where the old playground used to be.
3.单词短语 短语优先
在单词和短语表示同一个意思时,优先使用短语。恰当使用短语,一方面能使文章更加生动,另一方面也能展示出学生扎实的语言功底。
⑤There is no doubt that you should know about the history of the Tang Dynasty in advance.
→There is no doubt that you are supposed to know about the history of the Tang Dynasty in advance.
⑥Firstly, the final exam of this term is coming so I am busy preparing for it.
→To begin with, the final exam of this term is around the corner so I am busy preparing for it.
⑦I hear that he is ill, and I decide to visit him this Sunday.
→I hear that he is ill, and I decide to pay a visit to him this Sunday.
4.用高级词汇取代简单词汇
为了表现自己的语言功底,显示出自己的写作水平,应尽量避免反复使用低年级学过的简单词汇,尽量用高中阶段学到的词汇来代替。
⑧I should say sorry for being unable to go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon.
→I should make an apology for being unable to go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon.
⑨So long as we hold fast to our ideals and never give up, we are sure to ach