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专题14 书面表达(二)
(一)(2022·上海嘉定·二模)
Write at least 60 words according to the pictures about “A spring outing”(根据所给图片,写一篇关于“春游”的短文,题目可以另拟,字数不少于60词,标点符号不占格。)
climb a mountain pick up paper and bottles throw…into dustbins
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【答案】One possible version:
A spring outing
Spring in March, accompanied by the comfortable weather and warm sunshine, our class had a spring outing on Saturday.
We went to Renmin Park and hold some activities. All of my classmates were so excited that we looked like the birds just coming out from birdcage. We climbed a mountain and went boating. We picked up paper and bottles then threw them into dustbins. At the same time, we enjoyed the beautiful scenery of spring. Some people in the park also joined us and had fun. We had a happy day and the relationship of us were getting closer.
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【详解】
1.题干解读:这是一篇看图作文。要求根据图片提示,写一篇关于“春游”的短文。要包含所有要点,并适当发挥。
2.写作指导:本文时态是一般过去时,主要用第一人称来书写。在写作时应该注意符合题意,做到无语法和单词拼写错误,可适当补充细节使文章连贯。
(二)(2022·上海虹口·一模)
Write at least 60 words on the topic “A perfect family”(以“完美家庭”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格)
我们都和家人生活在一起,都希望拥有一个完美的家庭。请你描述一下你心目中的完美家庭。(注意:短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息,否则不予计分)
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