读后续写之动作、情绪、环境和主旨描写素材-2022届高三英语写作专项

一、动作描写 1.精选动词,精准描述 glance stare gaze glimpse shout cry yell scream smile laugh whisper murmur rush dash jump/spring to one's feet/struggle to one's feet 2.添加副词和介词短语来修饰动词 adverbs:tightly/cheerfully/hopefully/helplessly/desperately/fiercely(fight) violently/swiftly in+n:in terror/excitement/shock/sorrow/in a low(weak/sweet) voice with+情感名词:with delight/pleasure/excitement/satisfaction/anger/fear with+身体部位:with its sharp eyes/her shaky hand/her pale lips 例子:Suddenly,a moving dot(点) was spotted. As it drew nearer,Jane saw it clearly."The helicopter,“Jane murmured, sprang up and rushed to the center of an open area. She waved her yellow blouse desperately and yelled at the helicopter with excitement. To her great joy, this time she was spotted. Soon afterwards, the helicopter landed steadily on the ground and Tom jumped out. The moment Tom's eyes fell upon her, Jane threw herself into his arms."Honey, Never will I leave you again."Jane sobbed. The reunited couple hugged each other tightly.