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专题07 读后续写-【大题小卷】冲刺2022年高考英语大题限时集训(原卷版)
读后续写作为英语全国新高考卷和浙江高考卷的主要写作题型,占分比例较高,需要考生掌握一定的写作技巧。读后续写所给的阅读材料一般以350词以内的记叙文和夹叙夹议文为主,考生要在此文的后面续写约150词左右的文字与前文构成一个完整的故事。考生续写的部分多是故事发展的高潮或结局。情节曲折跌宕,线索性和逻辑性较强。续写部分分为两段,每段开头语已经给出。
考生所续写的部分要有创新性,不是原文的抄写或胡编乱造,不是随心所欲地写,而是要在所给段落开头完成续写部分(150词左右)。其中,段落开头语与传统写作中的开头语类似,在某种程度上引导你的思路向某个方面发展,所续写部分不能脱离各自的段落开头语另起炉灶,要在其基础上进行拓展发挥。
Last year at Christmas time, my wife, three children and I were on our way from Paris to Nice. Somehow everything went wrong. Our hotels were “tourist traps” and our rented car broke down. On Christmas Eve, when we checked into a dirty hotel in Nice, there was no Christmas spirit in our hearts.
It was raining and cold when we went out to eat. We found a small restaurant poorly decorated for the holiday. Only five tables in the restaurant were taken. There were two German couples, two French families, and an American sailor, by himself. They were eating in stony silence except the sailor. He was writing a letter, and a half-smile lighted his face. In the corner a piano player was listlessly (无精打采地) playing Christmas music.
All of us were interrupted by an old French flower woman through the front door. She had a worn overcoat and her old shoes were wet. Carrying her basket of flowers, she went from one table to another. No one bought any. Exhausted and frustrated, she sat down at a table.
The sailor finished his meal and got up to leave. Putting on his coat, he walked over to the flower woman’s table.
“Merry Christmas,” he said, smiling and picking out a handful of flowers. “How much are they?” “Two francs, sir.”
The sailor put a twenty franc note in the woman’s hand.
“I don’t have change, sir,” she said. “I'll get some from the waiter.”
“No, ma’am,” said the sailor, leaning over and kissing the ancient cheek. “This is my Christmas present for you.”
注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右;
2.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;
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Then the sailor headed for our table with the flowers in his hand.
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