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Section Ⅴ Writing——记述一次经历
[文体感知]
描写一次经历属于以记人叙事为主要内容,以叙述为主要表达方式的文体。在写作时,要交代清楚时间(when)、地点(where)、人物(who)和事件(what),然后再进一步叙述事件(what)、原因(why)和过程(how)。写作时应注意的问题:
(1)正确运用时态。最常用到的时态是一般过去时和过去进行时,但也要注意灵活运用其他时态。
(2)常用第一人称,从“参与者”的角度进行叙述。
(3)要重视句子的衔接,用好过渡词。
(4)话题通常和考生的生活有关,如校园生活、旅游、交通、交友等,平时要注意积累这些方面的词汇和短语。
[增分佳句]
(一)交代此次经历发生的时间、地点与相关人物
1.交代时间的常用表达:
one day;the other day;last week;last month;a few days/weeks/months ago;when I was...years old;a long time ago;at six o'clock in the morning;at/on the weekend;by the end of last term;during the summer holidays;on Sunday morning
2.交代地点的常用表达:
in one's office;on one's way to school;on one's way home;at the crossing;at the end of the street;at the foot of the mountain;at the airport
3.常用句型:
Last week,an exchange student called...from...came to our school.
Last weekend,our school invited a craftsman to teach us...
In order to help him/her to know more about Chinese culture,I prepared a series of activities.
(二)推动情节发展(事情经过)
常用表达:
then;suddenly;immediately;no sooner...than...;hardly...when...;while;when;as;not...until...
(三)介绍经历的结果或谈自己的感想
1.常用词汇:
at last;finally;luckily/fortunately;to one's surprise;feel tired/delighted
2.常用句型:
Personally,I think that...
What surprised/attracted/delighted us most was that...
Through this meaningful activity,we learned something that can't be learned in class.
He was very grateful for/appreciative of what I had done for him,and said he was deeply impressed with Chinese culture.
While working,I realized how...
From this experience,I felt...
I was deeply impressed/moved/touched by...
I learned a lot from...
What an unforgettable experience!
[典题示例]
假如你是李华,请根据写作要点用英语写一篇周记,记述你周末帮助家人做家务的一次经历。
要点:1.做家务的理由;
2.做家务的过程;
3.你的感受。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.开头部分已写好,不计入总词数。
I am an 18yearold middle school students.
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第一步 审题谋篇
第二步 词汇推敲
1.be busy with
忙于
2.help sb.with sth.
帮助某人某事