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Section Ⅴ Writing——建议信
[文体感知]
建议信是向收信人就某事提出自己的建议或忠告的一种文体。写信时要写明写信的原因、建议的内容、提出建议的理由,提出的理由要合情合理,语气一定要委婉和缓。
[基本框架]
[增分佳句]
第一部分 开门见山,说明写信的目的
①I know you are now having trouble communicating with others, and you may often feel lonely.
我知道你现在在与人交流方面有些麻烦,你也可能经常感到孤独。
②I'm glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to get along well with your classmates.
很高兴收到你就如何与同班同学相处征求我的建议的来信。
③Here are some tips/a few suggestions to help you.
这里有帮助你的一些建议。
④I think you can make it if you follow the advice below.
如果你听从以下建议,我认为你会做到的。
第二部分 对所提问题进行分析, 提出建议与改进措施并说明理由
①First(ly), why not join a club? If you do this, you can make friends.
首先,为什么不参加一个俱乐部?你如果这样做的话,就会交到朋友。
②Second(ly), you should/can try to talk with others. Then/That way, you will feel better.
其次,你应该尽力与他人交谈。那样,你会感觉好点。
③Third(ly), it would be a good idea if you read a book or listen to music. By doing this, you will calm yourself down.
第三,看书或听音乐将会是个不错的主意。通过这样做,你会使自己平静下来。
④Last but not least, you should talk with her first.
最后但同等重要的是,你应该先和她谈一谈。
⑤As far as I am concerned/In my opinion, you should help each other.
就我而言/在我看来,你们应该互相帮助。
第三部分 表达希望建议被采纳并盼望回复
①I hope you will find these ideas useful.
我希望你会发现这些办法有用。
②As time goes on, people will know you better and will like to make friends with you if you can follow the above.
如果你遵从以上建议,随着时间的推移,人们会更加了解你,会愿意和你交朋友的。
③I believe that if you follow my advice, you'll get along well with your classmates.
我相信,如果你听从我的建议,你会和同学们相处好的。
④I believe, with your trying, you can manage to overcome these difficulties.
我相信,有了你的努力,你会成功克服这些困难的。
[典题示例]
假定你是李华,你的好朋友苏茹在交友方面存在着一些困难,请根据下面提示给她写一封建议信。
1.要交朋友首先要做一个朋友;
2.要和朋友同甘共苦;患难之中的朋友才是真正的朋友;
3.友谊需要时间和投入(effort)。
注意:1. 根据要求适当发挥;
2.词数80左右。
第一步 审题构思很关键
第二步 核心词汇想周全
1.tip/advice/suggestion n.
建议
2.situation n.
情况
3.make friends
交朋友
4.have trouble/difficulty in doing ...
做……有困难
5.take one's advice
接受某人的建议
6.share happiness and sorrow with ...
和……同甘共苦
7.call for
需要
8.put one's heart into
全心全意
第三步 由词扩句雏形现
1.知道你在交友方面有困难,我很难过。
I a