UNIT 4 读后续写 写作微技能四　如何写读后续写(三)-2021-2022学年高一英语【步步高】学习笔记（北师大版2019必修二）word

巧润色　成美文 写作微技能三告诉我们根据首句提出一些问题，并进行详细回答，然后把答案连接起来，组成一个简单的段落，但是字数达不到要求，中间也没有衔接句，更缺少一些生动的语言表达，因为读后续写的语言表达要生动形象，离不开对人物动作的准确描写，情绪、神态的生动刻画，以及环境的渲染烘托。特别是环境的描写，它服务于文章的主题和人物刻画，不仅给读者一种身临其境的感受，有时候还可以推动故事情节的发展，烘托人物的心理活动，让文本的语言更丰富，读者的体验更深刻。真可谓“一切景语皆情语”(王国维)。借景抒情、寓情于景是写作中常用的手法。环境描写也可分为客观环境和主观环境。这里主要聚集客观环境(自然环境)的描写。 典例展示　写作微技能三中的典例2018年浙江6月的高考试题，经过润色以后展示如下： Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.My horse was so afraid that it began running ferociously.I could feel the air hitting my face heavily and hear my dad’s hysterical cry from a distance.My heart was pumping wildly and my blood was pulsing through my veins.I pulled back the reins，distracted the horse and tried every means to stop the horse but in vain.After what seemed an eternity，my dad caught up with me breathlessly and managed to stop my horse.But we found that we were in distress，with no track beside us. We had no idea where we were and it got dark.The river beside us was still and serene under the last ray of sunshine but we didn’t have the mood to enjoy it.Suddenly，it occurred to us that there was also a river nearby the farm house.Realizing the river may be a guide back，our spirits soared and we began to trot briskly along the river.Just a few minutes later，catching sight of the shape of the house，I felt a feeling of relief and relaxation surged through me.Our being lost added a special taste to my adventurous vacation which I would remember all my life. $