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读后续写
Part 1 归纳文本大意 推断叙述意图
读后续写多为记叙文,不管是写人,叙事,写景,还是状物,通常都会反映一定的主题。读后续写丌是无视所给短文的独立创作,而是顺着原作者的思路完成未完结的文本。动手续写前,首先要认真阅读所给短文,把握其文本大意和叙述意图。续写部分要在文本大意和叙述意图上不所给短文保持一致。
一、试读下面的短文及某同学的续写段落分析其衔接程度如何。
A friend of mine named Paul received an expensive car from his brother as a Christmas present. On Christmas Eve when Paul came out of his office, a street urchin was walking around the shining car.
"Is this your car, Paul?" he asked.
Paul answered, "Yes, my brother gave it to me for Christmas."
The boy was surprised. "You mean your brother gave it to you and it didn’t cost you nothing? Boy, I wish…" He hesitated.
Paul thought of course he knew what he was going to wish for. He was going to wish he had a brother like that. But what the boy said surprised Paul greatly.
"I wish," the boy went on, "that I could be a brother like that."
Paul looked at the boy in surprise, and then he said again, "Would you like to take a ride in my car?"
"Oh yes, I’d love that." the boy answered. After a short ride, the