Unit 3 Family matters Part IV Writing——记叙文（学案） -【状元桥·优质课堂】2021-2022学年新教材高中英语必修第一册（外研版）

英语必修第一册课堂学案(WY PartⅣ Writing-记叙文 答案精解P1 Now I have grown up, and I feel that I should not be so 范例点评 naive. I will live up to your expectations I love you and thank you so much for everything you:≯布局 did for me. Thank you for so many years of my education 体裁话题一记叙文,感恩母亲 and training Im very grateful to you for taking care of me. In my heart are many beautiful memories. I always时态人称一一般过去时为主,第一人称、第二人称 made you angry, but you were always very understanding 文章架构首段:感恩母亲 When I was sick, you were always in every possible way 中段:回忆往事 taking care of me. When I failed the examination, you 尾段:不辜负母亲的期望 always encouraged me to cheer up and not to lose heart. You 核心要点1.感谢母亲的教育、培养、照顾 always encouraged me to help others who are in trouble 2.回忆往事:母亲善解人意,精心照顾我 When i did good deeds, you were always thinking highly of 失败的时候鼓励安慰我,教我做 me. I am really thankful to you for your teaching me how to 3.不辜负母亲的期望 be“ a real person” 46日积 The trouble of managing a family is not less than governing a country. 日复ν管理一个家庭的麻烦,并不少于治理一个国家 Unit 3 Family matters 恩父母”的征文活动,请用英语写一封80词左右的征文,向 校英语报投稿,内容包括: 话题特点 父亲或母亲给你印象最深刻的一件事; 记叙文是通过对人物的描写和对事件的叙述使读者了 2.对父亲或母亲的感恩 解人物和事件的一种文体。根据具体的写作要求大多运用【五步成文】 描述性的语言,突出主要特征及过程。内容一般包括记叙:第一步:布局谋篇很关键 文的六要素,即who,when, where,why,how, result 审题 2.话题词汇 1.确定体裁:本文为一篇 记住 2.确定中心人称:本文主要人称为 难忘的 3.确定主体时态:以一般现在时和 为主。 (3)suddenly 突然 构思 (4) happen 1.第一部分:开篇点明主题; (5)come across 遇到 2.第二部分 (6)experience 经历 3.第三部分:表达对父亲/母亲的感激之情 (later on 后来 第二步:核心词汇想周全 3话题句式(试着替换方框中的黑体部分,变成你需要表达:1 感激 的意思) 使镇静 (1)叙述故事的时间、地点 On my way to school /When I was walking on the street,I: 4 对……有好处 第三步:由词扩句雏形现 came across an old friend 1.我非常感激我母亲为我做的一切 在去学校的路上/当我正走在大街上时,遇到了一位老朋友 I'm grateful to my mum fe @It was snowing/raining heavily on Monday morning. 2.她看到这一切,拿过一杯热牛奶让我静下来。 周一的早晨,雪/雨下得很大。 She saw this and brought me a cup of hot milk (2)叙述经过 O Last night I was busy preparing for my testwhen I 她让我知道了事物都有两面性 She let me know heard a loud noi 4.因为她我学会用另一种方式思考。 昨夜当我正忙着准备我的考试时,我听到一声巨响。 @We gathered at the school gate early i