19 操作篇之添细节-备战2022年高考英语应用文写作高分技巧(全国通用)

备战2022年高考英语应用文写作高分技巧(全国通用) 19 操作篇之添细节 【策略释疑】 1. 列举具体的实例进行补充说明 (1)我们青少年应尽我们所能保护环境、拯救地球。 We teenagers should do what we can to protect the environment and save the earth. →We teenagers should do what we can to protect the environment and save the earth. For example, we can use recyclable bags instead of plastic bags, refuse to use single-use products, plant more trees and save water and energy. (2)我要花一些时间和父母在一起。 I’ll spend some time staying with my parents. →I’ll spend some time staying with my parents, chatting with them and doing some housework. (3)我想找一个像我一样喜欢旅行的笔友。 I would like to seek a pen pal who is interested in traveling just like me. →I would like to seek a pen pal who is interested in traveling just like me. If possible, we can travel together or share traveling. 2. 增添与所写信息相关的神态、动作、心理描写以及背景渲染等内容 (1)我有时去村西的小河游泳。 I went swimming in the river in the west of the village now and then. →I went swimming in the river in the west of the village now and then. The water in the river was very clear. (背景渲染) →Weather permitting, I went swimming in the river in the west of the village now and then. (相关背景) (2)我发现了一些不良行为。 I found some bad behavior. →I found some bad behavior. Some people scribbled on the wall; some played soccer on the lawn and some people threw rubbish everywhere. (相关行为描述) 3. 增加相关信息的时间、地点等内容 (1)我要和父母一起去超市购物。 I’m going to do some shopping with my parents in the supermarket. →I’m going to do some shopping with my parents in the supermarket and won’t be back until about 5: 00 in the afternoon. (增加时间) (2)我已经带来了你让我归还的这两本书。 I have taken with me the two books you asked me to return. →I have taken with me the two books you asked me to return to the City Library. (增加地点) 4. 适当增加与所给信息相关的原因、结果、条件、让步、手段、目的、地点等内容 (1)假设你是李华, 你的英国笔友Henry最近来信询问你高考后的暑假安排。请根据下面要点写一封回信, 说明你的计划, 并简述理由。 要点: 1. 休息; 2. 读书; 3. 参加社会活动。 ①I need a good rest. I’ll do some reading. →I need a good rest because I do feel tired after the hard work of all these years. O