12 类型篇之祝贺信-备战2022年高考英语应用文写作高分技巧(全国通用)

备战2022年高考英语应用文写作高分技巧(全国通用) 12 类型篇之祝贺信 类型二 祝贺信 【典例示例】 　　假定你是李华, 得知你的外国笔友Peter获得了“汉语桥”中文演讲比赛一等奖。你为他感到骄傲, 并给他写一封祝贺信, 要点如下: 　　1. 天天练习讲汉语, 从不会到流利, 终于成功; 　　2. 继续努力, 有机会来中国留学; 　　3. 希望见面和交流。 注意: 1. 词数80左右。 2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。 参考词汇: “汉语桥”中文演讲比赛“Chinese Bridge” Chinese speech contest 【写作步骤】 Step 1: 精准审题　谋篇布局 人称 第一人称 (I), 第二人称(you) 时态 一般现在时; 一般过去时 段落布局: 开头点题: 表达祝贺 主体段落: 成功的原因并进行鼓励 结尾: 再次表达祝贺 Step 2: 头脑风暴　字字珠玉 (1)美词: express my congratulations, opportunity, communicate (2)佳句: ①As the saying goes, “Everything comes to him who waits”. ②Going on studying Chinese harder, you will have the opportunity to study in China. Step 3: 斟酌词句　妙笔生花 要点1: 正如谚语所说: “成功属于有准备的人”。 一般表达: There is a saying going like this, “Everything comes to him who waits”. 句式升级(定语从句) As the saying goes, “Everything comes to him who waits”.   要点2: 如果你继续努力学习汉语, 你就会有机会来中国学习。 一般表达: If you go on studying Chinese harder, you will have the opportunity to study in China. 句式升级(分词短语作状语) Going on studying Chinese harder, you will have the opportunity to study in China.   Step 4: 衔接过渡　斐然成篇 Dear Peter, 　　I would like to express my congratulations to you on your receiving the first prize of “Chinese Bridge” Chinese speech contest. 　　I know that you were not good at Chinese at first. However, you practiced speaking Chinese every day. As the saying goes, “Everything comes to him who waits”. Finally, you succeeded! In my mind, this match is very difficult for a foreign student. So I’m so surprised that you become champion of this competition. Going on studying Chinese harder, you will have the opportunity to study in China. At last, I hope to see you and communicate with you. 　　Sincere congratulations to you again! Yours, Li Hua 【仿写演练】 　　假定你是李华, 你班的澳大利亚交流生Catherine在你市举办的“外国人写汉字”书法大赛中荣获一等奖, 请你给她写一封邮件。 内容包括: 1. 祝贺她获奖; 2. 请她分享经验; 3. 希望她明年也参加。 注意: 1. 词数80左右。 2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________