04 社会正能量 -把脉2021年中考英语作文热点【学科网名师堂】

04-社会正能量 (一) 构建文明社会 为配合我市开展“创建文明城市(build a civilized city)”活动，学校举办以“How to Behave Well”为主题的英语征文比赛。请你根据所给提示内容，写一篇参赛短文。 　　提示：1. 衣着整洁;2. 保持环境卫生;3. 待人有礼，乐于助人;4. 遵守交通规则; 　　要求：1. 文章必须包括所给提示中1—4 项内容，可展开思路，适当发挥; 　　2. 文中不能出现考生的真实姓名、校名和其他真实信息; 3. 词数：80词左右。 满分优秀范文： How to Behave Well? 　　In order to build a civilized city, we students should try our best to behave well in the activities. 　　It's a good habit to keep our clothes clean and tidy. Our city should be kept clean every day. Don't throw litter or spit about. It's good manners to say "Thank you" and "Please" and so on. We should never say dirty words. Be friendly to others and always ready to help the people in need. For example, when we are on a bus, we should give our seats to the old and the women with babies. We should also obey traffic rules. When the traffic lights are red, we should stop. And we'd better not talk or laugh loudly in public. 　　If everyone behaves well, our city will be more beautiful and more attractive. （二） A small thing 提示：请根据所给题目“A small thing”写一篇英语短文，叙述一件你经历过的小事。 要求： 1.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁,词数不少于60个； 2.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名,否则以零分计； 3.请将短文写在答题卡上,写在本试题卷上无效。 优秀满分范文 A small thing There are many small things in life that make you moved． I had a very unforgettable thing on June 11 th，2012． It was a sunny day．On the way to school，my friend did something rude to me．It made me sad．What's worse，I got a"C"in my favorite subject．After school，I went home unhappily．It was dark in the room．Suddenly the lights were on，and I heard the song"Happy birthday"．I was surprised to see many people and a big cake．"Oh，it's my birthday．"I was so excited and happy．It was my first time to have a birthday party． I'll never forget that day． 【分析】 这是一篇命题作文，给出的题目是“A small thing”（一件小事），需要叙述一件经历过的小事，写作的时候要注意描述过去的事情要正确使用过去时态，描述一件事情要有条理，有内容，有时间地点人物以及具体的事件，描述要尽量具体一些，事情要有条理，避免流水账，同时要注意相关短语的正确使用，注意开头和结尾要自然。 【详解】 写作亮点：开头可以说“There are many small things in life that make you moved”（人生中有很多事情会让你感动。），这样的句子开头有总起的效果，然后就可以开门见山，开始叙事，叙事的过程中用到了很多短语，例如had a ve