8.3 写作训练-【方洲新概念】小学生英语知识学习手册

英语知识小 学 生 学习手册 372 三、写作训练 （我的周末） 习作一 My Weekend 写 作 要 点 提示 1. 可以写周末自己所进行或将要进行的活动。 示例： On Sunday morning, I went to the store with my mother. We bought a lot of food. 译文： 周日上午，我陪妈妈去商店了，我们买了很多食物。 2. 可以写周末的心情或者感想。 示例：I had a very good weekend. 译文：这周末我过得很开心。 3. 可以写对周末所见事物的感触。 示例： When I see the same thing again that happened last weekend, I’ll help him or her. 译文：我再遇到上周末同样的情况时，我会帮助他 / 她的。 范文(一) My Weekend It was Christmas on Saturday. I had a Christmas party with many friends at home. After we said to each other“Merry Christmas”, we sang Christmas songs. Then, my friends told Christmas stories, such as stories about Santa Claus. After that, I danced and laughed with my 第八章 写作 373 friends. When the party ended, we wished each other a Merry Christmas again and a Happy New Year. I had a good time this weekend. 名师点评 小作者通过对周末圣诞派对的叙述，给读者再现了一个 欢快的圣诞派对场景。叙述条理清晰，感情真挚，用词用语准 确，足见小作者扎实的基本功和综合运用语言的能力。这是一 篇优秀的范文。 精彩译文 我的周末 周六是圣诞节。我和许多朋友一起在家举行了一个圣诞派 对。我们互相说了“圣诞快乐”之后，开始唱圣诞歌。接着朋友 们讲了一些有关圣诞的故事，比如说关于圣诞老人的。接下来我 和朋友们一起跳舞和欢笑。派对结束时，我们又互相祝圣诞和新 年快乐。这个周末我玩得很开心。 范文(二) My Weekend I like my weekend. On Saturday, I do homework in the morning, then have lunch. I play computer games at 1:00 pm for one hour. I often play football with my friends in the afternoon. I like playing football. I listen to music in the evening because I really enjoy music. On Sunday, I study English. I go to bed early because I have school the next day. 英语知识小 学 生 学习手册 374 名师点评 本文小作者开头表达自己对周末的喜爱之情，紧接着叙 述了周六他经常进行的活动，同时表达了自己对所从事活动的 感想。最后简单叙述了自己的日常安排的活动。整篇思路清 晰，文章写作的视角，用词用句都能充分反映小学生的写作特 点，使人倍感亲切。 精彩译文 我的周末 我很爱我的周末。周六，我上午做家庭作业，然后吃午饭。 下午 1 点玩电脑游戏，玩一个小时。下午其他时间我经常和朋友 一起踢足球。我很喜欢踢足球。晚上我听音乐，我非常喜欢音 乐。周日，我通常去学英语。我很早就上床睡觉，因为第二天要 上学。 范文(三) My Weekend Last weekend, I went to my uncle’s farm with my parents. I saw a little rabbit on the farm. It was hurt, so we took care of it. We named it “Ben”. Ben is very lovely and I like him very much. I had a good time there. Next weekend I’m going to visit Ben. I am going t